Breathe Me - Lyrical Solo 09
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I wouldn't worry about extensions or lines. Your technique is beautiful. I would just work on some emotion. You barely drew me in.
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Wait are your from Wisconsin?
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your legs look like they're not connected at the knee caps :L
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beautiful extension and pointed feet just no stage presents or emotional connection but beautiful job keepp it up <3
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Great flex and stuff, but I think you need to work on your turn out!
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Wheres the passion? Where's the emotion?
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your very good. just work on your emotion :)
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You obviously have a lot of talent, but it looks like a series of disconnected steps. Part of that is the choreography--lots of showiness with little chance to really work with the music. But part of it is just stiffness--I hope you've been able to work on emoting since this, because you clearly have a lot of potential! I think my favorite part is 1:05
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nice technique!! now just work on throwing yourself into you dances!
good job!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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I just love it girl, you got it ;)
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good !
which studio are you with? I compete at standing ovation all the time
monstermash113 1 year ago
@monstermash113 i danced with Studio 2 Stage from FSJ. I now dance with Dance in Motion in Abbotsford.
Contortionbaby1 1 year ago
this was my first year of competition and i've definately improved since then... i don't think anyone will ever understand how much this song ment to me and it's quite sad that i couldn't do this song justice through my dancing but i appreciate all the critisming... i agree with all of it.
thank you for watching
Contortionbaby1 1 year ago 15