powerful scary disturbing opening... transition to the shooting cutting style for the 'school' shoot unconvincing. Camera too high, not enough attention to the color balance and image look in this section. Acting unconvincing after such a strong opening. Two shots are WEAK , don't stay on them. 3:13 back to scary girl, but this time i don't believe her.... Nice four shot in bathroom. needs snappier pick up on dialogue. WATCH SOUND LEVELS. good closing montage. FOF
powerful scary disturbing opening... transition to the shooting cutting style for the 'school' shoot unconvincing. Camera too high, not enough attention to the color balance and image look in this section. Acting unconvincing after such a strong opening. Two shots are WEAK , don't stay on them. 3:13 back to scary girl, but this time i don't believe her.... Nice four shot in bathroom. needs snappier pick up on dialogue. WATCH SOUND LEVELS. good closing montage. FOF
ESFfilmawards 1 year ago
Nominated for Best KS4 Film and produced by Y10 GCSE Media students...
ESFfilmawards 1 year ago