Happily Ever After- Original Song

OK, so this is Happily Ever After, my first original song. Constructive criticism is welcome and very much appreciated! Let me know what you think!




Lyrics:
I'm sitting here thinking about you
I can't get you off of my mind
I took a chance, I let you in,
Only to find...
That Happy endings, don't come easily
And fairy tales weren't written 'bout,
Girls like me

(Chorus)
Where's my happily ever after?
When they write my book it'll be missing a chapter
Cause I'm erasing you
From my memory
I don't need you, I'll write my own story

I found my prince charming,
Behind a bottle of Jack,
One look in his eyes,
There was no turning back
But I should have known
We weren't meant to be
Cause fairy tales weren't written 'bout,
Girls like me

(Chorus)
Where's my happily ever after?
When they write my book it'll be missing a chapter
Cause I'm erasing you
From my memory
I don't need you, I'll write my own story
I don't need you, I'll write my own story.

Category:

Music

Tags:

• Happily
• ever
• after
• acoustic
• original
• song
• breakups
• guitarist
• songwriter
• vocals
• solo
• fender
• music

[TheAcole1027]

thanks for checking it out!

[kkrazy17]

I loved it, I'd sing along to it in the car

[321rayofsunshine123]

@PriestOfMelody YES I AGREE.... the chorus needs to be a little more... out there..... BUT i love the lyrics :) great job :)

[PriestOfMelody]

I thought it was very good for your first song written. I would have loved to have heard a contrast of melody during the chorus section though. I think it would really set the song off. You have a very nice voice. Check out some of my songs if you get a chance.

[kamadakianpower]

Not a country buff, so I don't know wagon wheel. Sounds good though. You could list the lyrics though in the info, its nice to follow along while listening.

[humdinger77]

Wouldn't worry about it sounding like wagon wheel. You could make that case about tons of songs. Great job!

J

[bremwhite]

Great song! You have a beautiful voice :) Thumbs up from me.