ok before I start the story I have a couple of things to say.
1. I love you all so much, When I see you comment saying you like the story it makes me feel really happy. SO, I have a deal to make with you. I have midterms in two weeks. I don't think I'll be able to post much that week. I will try my best, but you all know how school is. So, if you can give me 10-15 comments on this story, or any others I may post after this, and get me up to 50 legit subscribers who'll read my story, I'll give you a marathon. Here's the thing. The day of the last midterm is friday the 23rd, I think. I have only one midterm, so I'll be home by about 10. SO I'll have all day to post for you guys. So if you can get me up to 50 OR MORE LEGIT subbers and 10-15 comments, you can have a marathon. OH AND YOU CAN CHOOSE THE STORY. It'll b about 5-6 maybe more chapters. depends on time and what you give me. I love you guys all so much, but I would like to have some more readers. and more COMMENTS! haha. ok now,
2. I'm winging this chapter, and i'll probs post a part two cause of all I typed about the marathon. We'll see. OK,
*While Nick and Jane are on their date with selena and Demi*
Kevin, Amanda, Joe, and Kristen were all really bored.
"So, what do we want to do?" Kevin asked.
"I know, let's watch a movie." Kristen suggested.
"What movie?" Amanda asked.
"The Notebook. I love that one." Kristen said.
"Ok, I guess. Do you guys mind watching that?" Amanda asked.
"Yea, sure." Kevin agreed.
"I don't mind." Joe said. Kristen put in the video and they all settled on the couch. It went Kevin, Kristen, Amanda, Joe. After about half-an-hour into the movie, Amanda was getting bored. SHe had seen this movie so many times, it didn't get to her anymore. She looked at Joe who was bawling his eyes out.
"Uhhh....Joe?"
"What? I haven't seen this movie for a while. It's so sad." He sniffed.
"Well, do you want to go on a walk? I've seen this movie so many times, it doesn't get to me anymore."
"Ok, sure."
"Guys, we're gunna go on a walk." Amanda told Kevin and Kristen.
"Ok, keep ur phone on you." Kristen said. Joe and Amanda walked out. They went through the garage and Amanda grabbed a soccer ball.
"Where are we gunna go?" Joe asked.
"There's a park not that far away."
"Oh, ok cool."
They kept walking and Amanda was doing tricks with her soccer ball the whole way there.
*Joe's Pov*
Wow, she's really good. I know I couldn't do any of that. We kept walking and we finally got to the park. It has a big playground and then a row of like six swings. Then there was a soccer field. Amanda headed over to the soccer field.
"I really like soccer, if you couldn't tell."
"Trust me, I've been in your room. I noticed."
"Oh, haha. Yea-"
"I've also seen Jane's room. It's filled with us and Michael Phelpes."
( A.N.-Amanda's room has all her soccer trophies and posters of Mia Hamm and David Beckham (sp there) and other of her favorite soccer stars. Jane's room has her medals and pictures of the Jonas Brothers and Michael Phelpes and other of ehr favorite swimmers.) Amanda laughed,
"Yea, she's pretty obssed, but all three of us are. She's just the most obsessed."
Joe laughed. Amanda started dribbling the ball and kicking it into the goal. "I have an idea."
"What?" Amanda asked ready for something ramdom.
"Let's play a game of one on one."
Amanda smiled, "Your on..."
*Kevin and Kristen*
They were still watching the movie. Kristen started crying. Kevin put his arm around her. She leaned into his chest. Even though she had seen this movie so many times before, it still got to her. The movie was over and kristen was still crying.
"Are you okay?" Kevin asked her.
She nodded her head, "It still gets to me. It's just so sad and romantic. They die in eachothers arms. They were so in love." More tears came down.
Kevin pulled her into a hug.
*Kristen's Pov*
OMG! Kevin Jonas is hugging me. I hear his heart beating so steadly. I widh me could be my Noah. (A.n.- that's his name right? I'm 95% positive it is.)
*Kevin's Pov*
I have it so bad for her. I would be her Noah. I wish she could stay in my arms forever. She started to pull away but kept her arms around me. I looked down at her and she looked up at me. I started to lean down. I was inches from her face when my stomach grumbled. UGGGH. why'd my stomach have to ruin the moment, but I am really hungry.
"I'm going to take a wild guess and say you're hungry." Kristen smiled up at me.
*Back to Joe and Amanda*
(Amanda's pov)
We were playing up to 15. The score was 9 to 4, me. I was determined to beat him. He was actually not that bad of a player. I had just scored my 10th goal. We'd stoped for a moment's breath. His sweat was seeping through his t-shirt.
"Why don't you just give up?" I asked.
"Because I'm a Jonas and we're not quiters." He had the ball. He took it up the court to my goal. I got in position. The ball was comming towards me and...
ok Ivve never actually seen the movie the notebook so i was pretty lost. haha
oh and in like the last sentance you say court but u play soccer on a feild. haha srry i just noticed that and couldnt resist a chance to correct sumone :p
but any way, awesome chapter. like seriously i cant wait to see how the other couples form and stuff now that Nick and Jane r together.
cant wait for part 2!
jgirl2126 3 years ago
haha, no part two actually, i got all i wanted in here. hehe.
The Notebook...It's a romance movie about this eldery couple and the wife has altimers(sp). So the husband is reading her this story and she doesn't know that its their story until she comes back. she like fades in and out. So in the end she's in her nursing home bed and her husband tries to sneak around to see her and he gets to her. in the morning a nurse finds them arm in arm in the bed and im pretty sure they dies together.
OMGxlovexdAnCe 3 years ago
it's up to 50 not actually 50 subbers, just thought you should know :)
OMGxlovexdAnCe 3 years ago