Whoever marked the comment below this, the one posted by "Riflekid44" regarding Georgia should be ashamed. Note specifically that he was not condoning the war in Iraq, but rather condemning Russia's invasion of its neighbor. His position was thoughtful, nonagressive and mostly spelled correctly, all rare things on this website. If you censor his beliefs because you don't like them, what does that make you?
I think you are overly critical of him, the song was actually VERY VERY good.
"Sunnis and Shiites just want their legal rights." Makes absolute sense! Have you paid attention to what is going on in Iraq??? Haditha, Blackwater, we do what we want.
Also, I like how he keeps turning his head and the statement at the end. He is getting into the song, and it only makes is better.
You need to throw a b minor and e minor bridge in there. Also, performance wise, you need to stop turning your head to and fro-- it takes away from your conviction.
"Sunnis and Shiites just want their legal rights." What does that mean? You should explore this statement a little more. It sounds like you're rhyming for the sake of rhyming and it subtracts from the song's message.
Finally, the "blood for oil, man..." statement at the end. It's over-arching and should be deleted all together.
Whoever marked the comment below this, the one posted by "Riflekid44" regarding Georgia should be ashamed. Note specifically that he was not condoning the war in Iraq, but rather condemning Russia's invasion of its neighbor. His position was thoughtful, nonagressive and mostly spelled correctly, all rare things on this website. If you censor his beliefs because you don't like them, what does that make you?
Zeroethorder 3 years ago
good song! thanks for sharing.
rickleanne 3 years ago
I think you are overly critical of him, the song was actually VERY VERY good.
"Sunnis and Shiites just want their legal rights." Makes absolute sense! Have you paid attention to what is going on in Iraq??? Haditha, Blackwater, we do what we want.
Also, I like how he keeps turning his head and the statement at the end. He is getting into the song, and it only makes is better.
Ohhhyeahhhhhhh 3 years ago
Hey I really like it!!
You did a great job, great song!
Keep up the good work.
Ohhhyeahhhhhhh 3 years ago
You need to throw a b minor and e minor bridge in there. Also, performance wise, you need to stop turning your head to and fro-- it takes away from your conviction.
"Sunnis and Shiites just want their legal rights." What does that mean? You should explore this statement a little more. It sounds like you're rhyming for the sake of rhyming and it subtracts from the song's message.
Finally, the "blood for oil, man..." statement at the end. It's over-arching and should be deleted all together.
StuartPitt 3 years ago
Catchy and honest -- this song deserves a big audience, IMO.
LeslieBudewitz 3 years ago
Where, before me, are the ages that have gone?
And where, behind me, are the coming generations?
I think of heaven and earth, without limit, without end,
And I am all alone and my tears fall down.
rebeca1952 3 years ago