Heard about the contest yesterday, this is one days work i would apreciate some feedback. What do youlike what do you hate. We plan to revamp soon just wanted to get somthing out for now.
At least remove the toothpaste, hairspray and so on... ;) Otherwise - The night-light effect is great, the inverted colors-effect is great, and the girl is sexy ;) Keep more coming - I'm looking forward to see the final version. Good job. :D Oh - and btw: I like the song - is there anything else to be found with this band? :)
Pretty good. But i have some issues with following the story... What is she doing on top of that building? Why does her mouth bleed (do the lyrics say 'my mouth waters'?)? What's with the guy with the mask, and why does he turn white all of a sudden? etc... Also, i think you should cut the bathroom-sequence - it doesn't really fit visually to the rest. Try and find an old, dirty bathroom with a fucked up, cracked sink and mirror - that might perhaps work better... :)
what IS this contest? 'cause i've seen about five of these videos so far.
blada600 5 years ago
kinda Silent hill 3ish
quietquiet 5 years ago
to many effects...puking blood was bad acting. I liked the whole feel of what you were doing though. I liked the small amount of little in the intro.
audiovision 6 years ago
pretty good.
gameoverfaggot 6 years ago
you really need help
MtFujiDisaster 6 years ago
this shit is so numetal and bad
ipoultre 6 years ago
cool good job, this is my video that is yet to be added
aftershock14520 6 years ago
At least remove the toothpaste, hairspray and so on... ;) Otherwise - The night-light effect is great, the inverted colors-effect is great, and the girl is sexy ;) Keep more coming - I'm looking forward to see the final version. Good job. :D Oh - and btw: I like the song - is there anything else to be found with this band? :)
M0rket 6 years ago
Pretty good. But i have some issues with following the story... What is she doing on top of that building? Why does her mouth bleed (do the lyrics say 'my mouth waters'?)? What's with the guy with the mask, and why does he turn white all of a sudden? etc... Also, i think you should cut the bathroom-sequence - it doesn't really fit visually to the rest. Try and find an old, dirty bathroom with a fucked up, cracked sink and mirror - that might perhaps work better... :)
M0rket 6 years ago