King Ramesez - Close Enough for Jazz
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Not bad. I would maybe add a little something to the hook/chorus. One thing I hate in hip-hop today is repetitiveness. I don't hate your song though bro. If you were selling millions with that hook, I might hate it a little bit. I like your E-40ish flow. I understand your style, so I know you weren't off beat very much, but there were parts that sounded like you slipped a little bit. Still good work man. Never give up.
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Tight lyrics, and the bells and horns are tight. I'm no expert but have listened to hip hop since 1991 ; I give it a 9/10
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Nice lyrics, but the beat aint saying nothing :)
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Sounds like there is potential there...less words would be more if you get what I mean, give the beat a chance to come thru and weave vocals in and out of the beat etc....big up to you though for the positive vibe...and for going against the 'low vibrational' hip-hop that has flooded the scene. Keep on going...and thanks for the heads up. :-)
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You Listen to alot of Aceyalone don't You ? haha Keep Up the Work Hope to Hear More Originality is the Key all love
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Well... You got my sub...
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nice song bro keep posting more songs, I wnat to hear more from u and I want to see more potential
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@thesouthrapsucks hahahaha word....
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Yo Ram, i'm a conscious artist from Philly Pa.... i def see ur potential! once i get out the studio ima link u in to some jawns yo... i like what ur doing, i respect what ur doing, just keep at it, the light inside u can only shine brighter ! like ur style, just dig deeper and tap into the funk and raw material famz.... thanks 4 the song ....i'll be listenin..get back...ONE.....
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yeah, you could've changed the beat where your voice syncs with the beats. regardless, good rap bro.
@jonez19 better than that bitch gayass lil wanye
thesouthrapsucks 1 year ago 12
the lyrics are alright.
BUT GOD CHANGE THE BEAT MAN.
and you need a faster beat cause you cant flow to this slow beat so try to speed up your beats.
and if you have a slow beat try to put as little words in a bar as possible because if you dont do that then the whole song will flop.
thankyou for sending me the link to your song, i will definetly keep my eye on you.
mania17austin 11 months ago 5