Original Song - 'Undone' by Jennifer Rafferty

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Hiya!
This is a song I wrote... yesterday... it's called 'Undone!' and this is me performing it on my keyboard.. please excuse the extremely cheesy drum sound!! ha ha!! but you can only work with what ya got!! I hope you can hear what I was trying to do with this song!! it's bascally a love song... being unable to believe that you've fallen in love!!

Just wanted to say thank you to everyone who subscribed over the past couple of days!! it's been quite overwhelming to go from not many subscribers to 170 odd! so thank you for your support!! Also a special thanks to MrPitiful and Casual Dave... (who had somewhat of a big part to play in my gaining of subscribers!! lol ) thank u both x x

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thanks for listening
Jennifer x x

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Undone - Jennifer Rafferty 2007. All Rights Reserved.

Sometimes the hardest words to say can make or break a heart
Sometimes the smallest thin will tell you if you'll ever part
Don't need some flashing light or neon sign to read your mind
They say that truth like this is hard to find

Chorus
I, never knew what trust felt like
I never knew what love felt like
I, never thought that this could be
I, don't fall in love that easily

It takes a lot for me to open up to anyone
It takes some time before I do, I usualy up and run
But in my night, your sun is rising up into my sky
I never falter, try to reason why

Chorus

Bridge
It's such a cliche, that we ended up this way
Boy meets a girl and girl falls in love
and I'm the one who's usually cynical
I'm the one who knows it all
But i never knew that I
I would come undone for you!

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[jenny0285]

thank you all for your comments! and for rating this video! :-)

lots of love

Jen xx

[jollywobbles77]

your amazing. one of the best songs ive heard in a long time. id buy a cd in a heartbeat

[CezzaBeBe]

Love your voice sooo much!

[Ihavethesewords]

Another lovely song! :-)

[aria09ism]

Lovely!

[DebrahSue10]

I wish there was a love button.<3

[justafan96]

the first part souds like your other song " you'll find me "

[william007100]

hey your really amazing you have it all great singer/songwriter and playing. have you been signed coz it would be criminal if you havent anyways keep it up big fan take care

[cowfinatic101]

This sounds a lot like "You Gotta Be" by Des'ree lol. It's ok though, who doesn't steal parts of other people's songs. :P

[Mi11ss]

Ooooh I like :) I like, I like a lot :)

[aznrocker12]

i like this version better:) than the guitar one. xPwell, anyways.. subscribing ! <3

[sujudbsksaranghae]

this is really cute! your voice is so pretty ^^