Fairytale Ending. Good enough.

A little song I wrote... Enjoy?

Category:

Music

Tags:

• Acoustic
• guitar
• original

[janisplennon]

*gasp* He plays my two favorite songs, AND he writes good music? I must be hallucinating. Are you a figment of my imagination? In case you aren't, well done.

[Koaf]

lol. That's funny.

[Lycaea]

I like the concept. I wish you'd amplified the volume, but as far as I can tell I the song. Something sounds off with the guitar. Almost like you're not holding the strings down very well. And from the lyrical standpoint if that line is "we can make the happy end" I know what you meant but it can sound completely different. And you should think about writing to suit your voice. There are some notes you barely hit so compose to compliment your range.

[Koaf]

lol... Well, I can actually hit much higher notes than that, but I was kind of being a lazy ass that day, and didn't warm up at all. I'll probably either just delete this one or re-record it sometime. Probably the prior, because I don't like this song very much either.

But thanks all the same.

[shanti92]

I love this song! once again, beautiful voice... i can't believe you wrote that!<3

[Koaf]

: )

[MusicLovinGirl1707]

your adorable =] lol Awesome guitar playing and i LOVE the song :] Keep up the great work ! =D

[DarknessofWhite]

Amazing, just like you did in the Pop Concert this year.

[orangejuiceandarms]

Oh! And is the waffle song on here somewhere?? :D ha.

[orangejuiceandarms]

Aw. This makes me happy. :) When did you write this, eh? I like reading the comments most. :) :) FAMOUS!!!

[corndodoubleg]

AY! waffle house yo!

[purplesinger]

This is such a sweet song!! :) I'm really impressed, I've heard some pretty awful stuff here that claims to be music/covers, but you do very well with both :) I look forward to seeing more! &hearts;