My Bands First Song/demo:The Last Phase - Sunshine

this is our very first song/demo after deciding to make a band, [lyrics included below.]
song written by Ashley, Abi and Jenn.

its Still a little rough so bear with me, since i got my i mac i've had the pleasure in putting this song together.




Lyrics:

life is good
and i'm still smiling
even though
my heart is torn
in several linings
dont get me wrong
I'm content with who i ma
but without you
I am blank

Life is good
the sun is shining
the thought of you
distracting me
from everything i thought i knew
yes i'm hurt
but i'm still living
after what you've put me through
after all you've put me through

[chorus]
As the thought of you fades
today is a new day
the sunshine will keep the dark away
as i start to let you go
I'm smiling again
I still got my good friends
who stuck by me before and till the end
nothing matters anymore
you don't matter anymore

When i woke up
i looked beside me
i heard a voice
the touched something deep inside me
I saw the most beautiful eyes
it's like the sun lived inside them
maybe i can love again.
just stay close to me sunshine

[chorus]
As the thought of you fades
today is a new day
My sunshine will keep the dark away
as i start to let you go
I'm smiling again
still got my good friends
who stuck by me before and till the end
nothing matters anymore
you don't matter anymore

Category:

Music

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• xhaiijinxtx
• sunshine
• the
• last
• phase
• music
• myspace
• indie
• acoustic
• rock
• xxprincesspunkxx

[CasualDiscussion]

The singing is good, and the guitar playing is passable. But the lyrics are shallow and boring, and the whole song in itself is cliche is just boring.

[xHaiiJinxtx]

@CasualDiscussion Thanks for sharing

[KEVINTACKTV1]

i respect your music syle but this is gay listen to brutal hardcore METAL

[xHaiiJinxtx]

@KEVINTACKTV1 well… thats not respecting my music style by calling it gay, Jus saying. and Buddy, I do listen to "Brutal hardcore metal" and its nothing special, and all very much the same, as with hardcore concerts where a bunch of tools swing their legs and arms around like idiots trying to hit eachother…. jus not my thing. i listen to everything and Brutal hardcore metal is NOT one of my favorites. i like actual lyrical substance, not a bunch of pig squeals and deep growls. But Thanks.

[ssstwi]

It's cool, but don't you like to put drums on it?? It would sond a little more powerful!! But the guitarist and the singer are very well

[KatieMcFucker12]

PUSSSSIIIEEES. Oh no my heart is broken, cry me a fucking river. Please write better lyrics, these are sooo gay you emo pussies.

Alright, I'm done trolling for today...

[KatieMcFucker12]

@CasualDiscussion YESSSSSS

[haleyanddiana]

@xHaiiJinxtx like metal and i very much respect your style, not everyone at metal concerts hurt one another but some idiots decide its "cool". Very good start :) The guy talking about "brutal hardcore metal" And how he "respects" your music is probably just pretending to get popular, me? Im completly weird, i listen to metal, i draw anime, i love anime, and stuff, i also like ambient music and industrial :D I respect you though :) keep up the good work

[RAWWWHful]

this is wonderful :D

[jerwar68]

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[RockKillTwig]

good shit!!! love it, could you message the guitar tab over plz

[JVCoop701]

Overall pretty decent. Guitar seemed pretty solid all the way through and didn't here any problems with the rhythm. The only advice I would have for you is watch your vocals at the end of some of your verses. You can hear the tone become shaky. And just a personal preference don't let the harmony overtake the melody it should compliment. But overall, well done!

[LJP707videos]

@LJP707videos ....Opps. I meant "became" cool to look like a third world poor person with nothing to do but force objects into your face for entertainment. That does not look cool. You look like a fucking idiot. It is disgusting. What the hell is your problem? Take that crap out! I can't even stand to look at you like that.