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Day's Left (Niley) Short Story part 5

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215 days left- I was over at my parents house for dinner tonight with Kevin, Joe, and Frankie. We were in the family room just talking about everything that is going on with one another, Kevin and Danielle are doing great, Joe had meet a girl at a party he went to last week, and Frankie he is finishing up his final year of college, I had also told them about Miley. About an hour into talking and eating appetizers, I started to cough. As I started to cough my mom started to freak out thinking I was dying. She ran over to my side and started rubbing my back; though once I claimed down she just started asking question like if I have to go to the hospital. I told her I was fine but all night she just keep asking me question just to make sure. This was why I didnt want to tell anyone about this especially my family because I knew this was how they would treat me. Though what took me over the top was when my mom asked if what we were having for dinner was okay that she could make something different. I just stood up I didnt tell you about my Ischemic because I didnt want you to treat me like this. Please Im the same guy I was before, I just have to take more precautions with what I do, other than that Ill tell you when I need to help or need something different. So please just treat me the same. I asked them with pleading eyes. Were sorry honey. My mom answered back with tears in her eyes. I just dont want to lose you.

200 days left- I walked into a building that was like my second home, and I didnt like that feeling. I went up the stairs but I got out on the wrong floor. I had got out on the Baby floor. I dont know why but something was pulling me, telling me to walk in farther. As I did I walked past the room where you see all the newborns in the incubators. I saw all the pink and blue blankets and the little tags on the carrier. There was one though that caught my eye; she had a pink blanket wrapped around her tiny body. She was so tiny, much tinier then the others, but also so beautiful. I looked down to see the name on it and it read Heaven. I just watched as she slept so peacefully well as peaceful as a baby can with tubes going in and out of them everywhere. I then felt a hand on my shoulder. She was born premature. She only has about six months, not even that much if she cant breathe on her own. The doctor said as he looked at the baby I was looking at. Why are you telling me this? Arent you like not allowed to?I asked confused. Well Im not but she is doing the same thing as you. Youre not alone. You two are fighting together for your lives. He told me as he walked away. I looked at Heaven once more before I walked away. I got farther down the hall when I bumped into someone. Im so sorry; I wasnt watching were I was going. I said to the girl I had bumped into. No it was my fault. She said as she looked up at me and when she did I realized who I had bumped into. Miley? I said as I looked at her. I havent seen her in weeks and here she was coming out of the child care room. I then looked down at her shirt to see she had a little bump on her stomach. I saw tears run down her face, and I softly placed my hand on her stomach as a hot tear fell from my eye. Youre pregnant? she just nodded as she placed her hand over mine. Youre going to be a dad. She told me, but I just shook my head. Ill be gone by the time you have the baby. I said as I realized that Im going to be a father that will never be able to hold his baby in his arms, tell him I love him and if its a boy I wont be able to teach him to play sport and if its a girl I wont be able to scare away the boys. Though mostly I wont be there for the birth and its growing up.
To.Be.Continued.

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  • its amazing!! nick needs to survive!! and be with miley and the baby lol

  • OMG! Loved it! But so sad =(! He has to survive!

  • love love love it

  • I loved this story!

  • this is sooo sad! loved it! :)

  • Mileys pregnant but Nick is gonna die...

  • :(

    how sad... i hope he survives, like they find a miracle cure out of like wonder bread...

    hahaha random but yea, that would be cool(:

    cause it IS wonder bread(:

    hahaha awesome job(:

  • this brought tears to my eyes

    loved it

    can't wait for the next one

  • oh my gosh this is so terribly terribly sad. i thought she was pregnant though :) great job on this ep, i know i say it everytime but i LOVE this story.

  • ahhhh-mazing i loved it it was so touching i had a feeling she was prego :)

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