If it be written somewhere (Song by me)
If it be written somewhere that two fish are to meet
in the waters of the sea
What difference does it make
if it is deep or shallow?
What difference does it make
if it is wide or narrow?
They'll meet the same
If it be written somewhere that two stars are to shine
in a corner of the sky
What difference does it make
if our rockets cannot reach them?
What difference does it make
if their rays will never warm us?
They'll shine the same
If it be written somewhere that two birds are to fly
in the Autumn to southern skies
What difference does it make
if we flap our arms and jump around?
What difference does it make
when we know we'll never leave the ground?
They'll fly the same
i am wondering " if it be written somewhere that two people are to fall in the love of honey moon, what difference does it make if they promise and take the vows?what difference does it make when we know the earth is round and still turns around, they'll love to the end?
excuse me for strange comment as i woke up at midnight and listen to your songs.
nice work! ;D
greensoulo 2 years ago
Collaborative songwriting - I'm all on for it!
I suppose the song, as it is, is leading somewhere, but never really gets there. You've provided a great ending, though it does need to be clipped a bit here and there to fit into the melody. I'll get working on it
All the best
cajonbongo2007 2 years ago