@CaveofTwoLovers Hmm... you think outside the box... u a guy or a girl? Cuz if ure a girl, you are amazingly unobscure for the rest of the gender. Regardless, ur a really violent person and i like that. keep up the bad work!
Because it isn't enough to die, you gotta go out with a bang. Like strapping explosives to the body then go get a big crowd of people who are there to see a suicide jumper, see if you can get the media there, then after you've got a big enough crowd, jump and set off the explosives mid air a little way down so your body parts rain a mass pile of meat that will be sure to traumatize a lot of people.
about the music... UH-UH! absolutely not the right music and you tone of voice was too jolly. I'd give you a B-, but since I liked the pictures, I'd say... A- is better. Keep it up, and please take this into consideration. :D
@CaveofTwoLovers Why complicate things??? Just put yourself in a coffin, hanging from 30 feet over a bed of burning , 5 foot wide, splintery spikes and keep bouncing in the coffin until the rope breaks. Nothing to it, if you can afford some 5 foot wide wooden spikes and a shitload of gas, and if you can find a fragile rope. Any questions?
Only now I noticed. Shinagami! Lol
MsBabyface2011 10 months ago
I say, that chap at 2:27 is positively despicable!
megadork456 10 months ago
@CaveofTwoLovers Hmm... you think outside the box... u a guy or a girl? Cuz if ure a girl, you are amazingly unobscure for the rest of the gender. Regardless, ur a really violent person and i like that. keep up the bad work!
tarekatorr 1 year ago
@tarekatorr
Because it isn't enough to die, you gotta go out with a bang. Like strapping explosives to the body then go get a big crowd of people who are there to see a suicide jumper, see if you can get the media there, then after you've got a big enough crowd, jump and set off the explosives mid air a little way down so your body parts rain a mass pile of meat that will be sure to traumatize a lot of people.
:D Now THAT'S a death.
CaveofTwoLovers 1 year ago
about the music... UH-UH! absolutely not the right music and you tone of voice was too jolly. I'd give you a B-, but since I liked the pictures, I'd say... A- is better. Keep it up, and please take this into consideration. :D
tarekatorr 1 year ago
@CaveofTwoLovers Why complicate things??? Just put yourself in a coffin, hanging from 30 feet over a bed of burning , 5 foot wide, splintery spikes and keep bouncing in the coffin until the rope breaks. Nothing to it, if you can afford some 5 foot wide wooden spikes and a shitload of gas, and if you can find a fragile rope. Any questions?
tarekatorr 1 year ago
i would give a B but only because you were way to happy, its a dramatic horror but still good job and keep it up.
114spencer 1 year ago
good and all but ur waaaaaaaaaay to happy reading it, def not dramatic enought. its a solid B, like i said add more drama and ud be fine
apolv6 1 year ago
Well done. A+
CriKKKeycrocodile 1 year ago
You just raped one of my favourite stories
medievalxsovereign 1 year ago