THE FIRST STEP IS THE HARDEST - Story by David Randall Curtis

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Uploaded by on Jul 18, 2009

I have a poetry chapbook loaded with illustrations that comes with 2 dvds of me doing spoken word.
It is available at: http://www.filmbaby.com/films/4408
--or private message me. Email is: b8888a@aol.com

Facebook: DavidRandallCurtis
Twitter: DRCpoetry


Special thanks to Pam Power and Sarah Aufiero for their help with this video—and if you dont like it—please blame THEM! :P

And... thank you to everyone that has subscribed and/or makes comments for pushing me over the 1000 subs mark!

This story is dedicated to Kelly. May he rest in peace.

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  • "i left a five dollar tip...with a cigarette on top of it"... you smug, smart assed, sarcastic bastard! HAHAHA! I FUCKING LOVE IT!

  • MzSkribble: Me??? Smug? Sarcastic?? Shirley you jest! :p

    Thanks for the comments ;)

  • You did this as a poem before, didn't you? It's just as good as a story.

  • rozeboosje: no, but I did send out some versions of it for feedback--perhaps you got one? Then again, the characters in most of my poems are either drunk or blasted out of their minds! :p Glurb-less bastards! :p

  • you are one crackingly natural storyteller

  • And MaryCigarettes is the greatest male singer on YouTube!!!! :P (and I am his bitch! :P ) - love ya mary!

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  • One of my favourite things in the world is listening to stories read aloud =) You are a master at it, David! I particularly love your turns of phrase and the scene in the car near the end. The tension you create is brilliant ^^

    " 'I think the only thing that's tragic is people who can't take a joke.' I said. She slammed the door and walked out of my life."

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  • "the church of the easily offended" Great! This was a fine piece of writing and a great piece of story telling.

  • i just watched you recite someone elses story...dont under rate the fabric of your own underwear david..it hugs you nicely...and i think the fabric of yours, is actually of a higher quality than his. hahahahahahahahaaaaa true!!!!!!

  • Interesting about sobriety chips. Makes sense though.

  • sfs

    (so fucking sexy)

    -xxxild's understudy.

  • Fiction Factory for the win! Lick my balls you hairy chicken! ahfha;hf] asdba

    xb

    va

  • You really know how to animate a story, beautifully.

  • life is poetry and your words are the poetry of life.

  • came to give you more stars and listen to you again..so cool!

  • You must be quite a good writer

  • I remember this one! I like the way you did it, and the decoration :)

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