THE FIRST STEP IS THE HARDEST - Story by David Randall Curtis
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One of my favourite things in the world is listening to stories read aloud =) You are a master at it, David! I particularly love your turns of phrase and the scene in the car near the end. The tension you create is brilliant ^^
" 'I think the only thing that's tragic is people who can't take a joke.' I said. She slammed the door and walked out of my life."
All Comments (75)
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"the church of the easily offended" Great! This was a fine piece of writing and a great piece of story telling.
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i just watched you recite someone elses story...dont under rate the fabric of your own underwear david..it hugs you nicely...and i think the fabric of yours, is actually of a higher quality than his. hahahahahahahahaaaaa true!!!!!!
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Interesting about sobriety chips. Makes sense though.
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sfs
(so fucking sexy)
-xxxild's understudy.
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Fiction Factory for the win! Lick my balls you hairy chicken! ahfha;hf] asdba
xb
va
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You really know how to animate a story, beautifully.
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life is poetry and your words are the poetry of life.
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came to give you more stars and listen to you again..so cool!
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You must be quite a good writer
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I remember this one! I like the way you did it, and the decoration :)
"i left a five dollar tip...with a cigarette on top of it"... you smug, smart assed, sarcastic bastard! HAHAHA! I FUCKING LOVE IT!
MzSkribble 2 years ago
MzSkribble: Me??? Smug? Sarcastic?? Shirley you jest! :p
Thanks for the comments ;)
DavidRandallCurtis 2 years ago
You did this as a poem before, didn't you? It's just as good as a story.
rozeboosje 2 years ago 2
rozeboosje: no, but I did send out some versions of it for feedback--perhaps you got one? Then again, the characters in most of my poems are either drunk or blasted out of their minds! :p Glurb-less bastards! :p
DavidRandallCurtis 2 years ago
you are one crackingly natural storyteller
marycigarettes 2 years ago 3
And MaryCigarettes is the greatest male singer on YouTube!!!! :P (and I am his bitch! :P ) - love ya mary!
DavidRandallCurtis 2 years ago