The Jedi Artifact
Loading...
3,700
Loading...
Uploader Comments (odlin73)
see all
All Comments (9)
-
I liek the lines. i do have a little advice: Work on your camera work and your cheropahy on the lightsabers.
But it is actually pretty good somewhat:)
Hope this helps
-
but like joey say, there were good things but still tons more to go....
-
Very good. I want to see more.
-
well it was a better attempt than i would have ever done but like joeydoo3 said (although its original) the opening is over used all together the story was good but the voices could have been louder. i look forward to the sequel
Loading...
There's a lot of things you could improve on; the sound mixing, and the choreography come to mind...But the thing that sticks out to me the most is the fact that they're STILL using X-Wing Fighters 50 years later!! HA!
weeksie21 4 years ago
If you've made one of these, I'd like to see it.
odlin73 4 years ago
LOL its funny how he was running after him in the beginning
CptJackSparrow82 4 years ago
The actor who played the Jedi has a diability.
odlin73 4 years ago
where the hell did u get the outfits?
Hitmansniper123 4 years ago
Well, the outfits, obviously, weren't great because the film had a budget of $0. Matt's Jedi costume actually started its life out as Dracula costume. Mine, on the other hand, started it's life asa a karate gi and a pair of khaki pants. The boots and cloak I got from renaissance website.
odlin73 4 years ago