Happy Camper - 11
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U should like completely redo it like in 3 or 4 parts. won't mind waiting, as long as the next ending is satisfying. though i didn't understand why that guy wanted a date if he was an alien.
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the missing scene accors when shes putting on her make-up!
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I am very sorry to hear about your condittion. I wish you all the luck in the world for a speedy recovery.
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Right on both counts, unfotunately. Let me deal with my medical issues and I hope to revisit the story with a more developed and gradual several episode ending.
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Uh, now I'm confused. This is a single, forced ending in place of what should have been several episodes, but it is epsiode 11and I'm not sure what the missing scene is to which you refer. Let me know and maybe I'll add a scene as I'm less than satisfied with this ending also.
As I noted in a comment to smcmorland below, if I can address my medical issues I hope to revisit this story and do a cleaner, more developed ending.
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what no episode eleven and whats with the deleted scene?
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Seems kinda rushed. not a very satisfying ending.
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Well, so long.
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I still really like this story. I'm sorry you weren't up to the added chapters. I am sad that the mom and dad died but it great that Jack & Tina made it & are in love. Also, that they didn't swap back but do have added memories to make things easier for them. LOL that Tina is so happy to be 'herself' I think & not have to go back to being jack? Nice clift hanger ending. It was a really stretch having the stupid villian turning our to be an alien! I hope you revisit Tina & Jack again.
jhgf88 3 years ago
Thanks. I hope to revisit them also. As to the alien, who else did I have whos could be so stupidly villanous? His behavior is too illogical at every step. Any one in his or right mind would have stopped at any of a half dozen interim points. At least there was some foreshadowing (albeit not enough).
JayeMichael 3 years ago
I love this series, and whatever you decied to do I'll be ok with. I understand that making a machinima is very hard.
powerbomb2 3 years ago
Would that it were simply me getting bored. Actually, I just got diagnosed with a serious medical condition that I need to address (as well as the pain that prompted testing to obtain the diagnosis and the lethargy associated with the radiation treatment I've been getting). I'm worried I won't be able to finish the sotry and did NOT want to leave it hanging. This, this less than satisfying ending -- at least for the moment.
JayeMichael 3 years ago