Fall [Original Song]

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This isn't about me, by the way.
So don't go thinking that.
Everybody will think it's about them, though. And chances are, if they think so... it is.

Fall
Lauren Ligocki

i can't tell you what she feels like
or why she cries when i'd be dancing
with my red umbrella
i couldn't say

when the rain falls, she falls with it
hits the ground crawling
when the rain falls
she hits the ground hard

don't tell her she's pretty
she'll just say no
don't tell her god loves her
to force her to smile
she'll just feel guilty
and fall

just hold her, don't say anything
it isn't what she wants to hear
don't try to rationalize
don't plug her tears
don't say anything at all.

Category:

Music

Tags:

• alternative
• indie
• pop
• unsigned
• piano
• depression
• rain
• seasonal
• girl
• sad
• cry
• tears

[wiseimmorto]

love the piano and lyrics. try being a little less nasal and more forward (nasal pharynx as such)

Fun fun, keep up the great work!

Good luck!

[L1k3WTF01]

Why the hell isn't this on the radio already? subscribed...

[zorromind]

beautiful OS it's a deep in heart

[Actique]

Actually had to add my first "favorite"... This is perfect. Love you.

[Actique]

Flawless. Im jealous.

[ScorpiusMusic]

Okay, new favorite....along with Rose Color

You're just....amazing

[glitterchica1324]

woah. luv it, i LOVE your voice

[JosephsUnderdog15]

I love this..once again.

[wwcduck]

this is awesome.

I just didn't like the parts where the lyrics go "hit the ground, hard"

You should change the "hard" part to something like "hit the ground, endddlesssssllyyyyy" and keep that note going instead of just stopping with "hard". Hopefully I said that clear enough. Otherwise, this is awesome, no joke.

[AntoratheVampire]

I liked it, some times you screamed a little to much insted of singing (i'm not that good in english , i don't want this to sound rude ;) ) but the rest was great