"The Role" criticizes how scripted our modern society has become. Using the metaphor of our world being a "stage", it suggests that we have all become puppets in that we have stopped thinking for ourselves and blindly follow what others have prescribed for us.
As someone else said, the visuals are very accommodating. Wonderful job, fellow Torontonian :) It got really intense around the last lines too.
SolaceMusicChannel 2 months ago
i love it...very deep and thoughtful.....
terribletome 2 months ago
i've heard this poem before and just loved it.
had no idea you wrote it. will check out your other works.
take care, miss rhyme:)
NeverMindTheSnow 2 months ago
Wow, you are really deep. I really enjoy your visual walk though of imagery and words. Incredible topic/idea. (( AWESOME ))
geogreg27 2 months ago
Fantastic work, and you wouldn't think so being young, but this is something over half the band debate and discuss on a regular basis as there are a lot of pressures on the young these days!
TheDisguisesMusic 3 months ago
I really like this, the recitation and the text :)
JackAsmo7 3 months ago
Hi Lara! You really hit the nail on the head with this poem! I think a lot of us feel the same as you - but the way you put it so eloquently into words...Ooooo - I feel another idea for a song coming along... :D! B
TheKnightimeProject 3 months ago
Beautifully written and read. Powerfully evocative. Thank you for sharing your Poetry dear Friend:)
CCPoetryNow 3 months ago
Your poem reflects upon the dark underbelly of the fish - dark because it is in shadow. We all swim as if in a dream, for some their roles are simpler, for others not. My father was a stagehand, my mother a painter. I never wanted to be a performer on the stage. There was something grander to be found when I contemplated an empty theater as an empty canvas...I continue to seek that fish to be in society.
ohwhererehwho 3 months ago
Nice! I believe that poetry represents the truth, maybe poetry creates its own reality within the mind of the reader and writer and this is where the truth of poetry comes from!
nickharvey7 3 months ago