"helpless and left for dead..."

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I'm thinking about going farther with this idea but I'm not sure how it's gonna all play out.. I was trying to go for a simple video but there are parts that irritate me and there are parts that I love. Kinda confusing, I know but I tried!

storyline:

-Mufasa sends hyenas to kill his son because he thinks he is an unworthy heir.
-Simba gets away by jumping off the cliff and ends up in the desert.
-He wanders for days before collapsing, the vultures following his every step.
-Meanwhile Mufasa breaks the news to the pride, the hyenas tell him that Simba got away and he is displeased.
-Scar comes to the rescue and bats away the vultures.
-He tells Simba about Mufasa's lies of loving him and promises to take care of him.
-Holding Simba reminds him of Kovu, his son.
-Flashback time!
-Scar and his son were relaxing when Scar hears a sound. Telling his son to be quiet he sneaks off and attacks a lioness that was waiting there.
-Mufasa comes out of the grass with his band of hyenas to kill Kovu.
-Scar lets the lioness up when he notices birds settling where Kovu is, she suddenly yells Mufasa and Scar realizes what happened and speeds away.
-Scar gets there too late and Mufasa slaps him aside, giving him his scar. His son is struggling on the ground from fatal wounds.

Category:

Film & Animation

Tags:

• scar
• simba
• plot
• murder
• hyenasa
• mufasa
• evil
• storyline