Poem - The Beauty in the Winter Garden...

This is a sonnet I wrote in school about 3 years ago. It's written from a young man's perspective, and I pictured the beauty to look like lady Amalthea from the movie The Last Unicorn (that's why I gave her white hair). Here's a picture if you want to know what she looks like: http://www.jennusinystranecky.wz.cz/Amalthea-3.jpg

Happy Valentines Day everyone!

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Entertainment

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• Poem
• Beauty
• Winter
• Garden

[Endlessfantasy]

beautiful poem!

[AedeusLeonora]

Thank you! :)

[britpete]

A nice poem and a nice video. My one criticism would be the use of the slang word "wanna" That's all right for pop songs but seems out of place in poetry. I still enjoyed it though.

[marianou6]

kissss



[beautifulblue500]

heartfelt & touching <3

[SupermeislandTV]

That was beautiaful, It made me cry, I love you so much, I loved everything. Thankyou

[johndeweb]

Thought provoking!

[ziilike666]

aaammm ... wow... reading the poem in the rythm of music ... wow ... have you tried to read/sing within the same music... in some places needs a little modificatoin, but minor, but the feeling .. wow... adagio, ma non troppo, sonore sostenuto... wow :)