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Uploaded by on Apr 6, 2009

Another one of my gothic poems. If you don't like it, get lost.
Song: "Lost in the Darkness" By: Nox Arcana

Broken:

Abandoned at the gates of hell
to suffer on my own
my shattered heart still dares to beat
as I roam the world alone

No stranger to betrayal
broken promises or lies
dreams of happiness are fading
right before my bloodshot eyes

With no one left to turn to
with no one left to care
I sit alone and wonder
if you were ever really there

As my memories unravel
and I slowly fall apart
I relive all those moments
that tore a hole right through my heart

No hands reach out to save me
as I fall into the void
and I disappear forever
from this life that lies destroyed

(end)

Please do not copy or rewrite any of my poetry and try to pass them off as your own. Thanks.




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  • Very good!.....you should have more comments here!...don't know why....

  • @TheFearDorcha Thank you. Glad you enjoyed :)

  • ur facked get a job jinx is hireing down da fishplant over longcove

  • @FunkmasterT69 You seriously need to work on your grammar and punctuation. A job at the fish plant wouldn't do me any good, seems I live nowhere near Long Cove. Who the hell are you to judge my employment status?

  • you would look better if you weren't so fat. fyi yaa cunt!

  • @sledgedbrain well thanks for that, but my boyfriend loves me as is, and his opinion is the only one that really matters to me. Go fuck yourself :D

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  • FIVGE STARS AWESOME POEM!

  • Indeed, very good poem. My family appreciates some one to make our species aknowledged.

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  • @AlecDraven I love you too :D

  • @AlecDraven thank you my love. You mean the world to me :)

  • I love you.

  • You'll never be alone again.

    I promise.

    Good poem too.:)

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