Original Song by Jenny Cargill - You Let Me Fall

It's been a while! Since I have every other Friday off now I am going to start playing/recording again. Here is a song my sister and I wrote just recently. Recorded on my iPhone, sorry about the sound quality. Enjoy!

Lyrics:
Pre-Chorus: Dodge a bullet or fight a flame,
did you, close your eyes and pass the blame for me.
Was I the one you were looking for,
or was I the one that was standing at your door,
waiting for you.

Kill me sweetly, and
kiss me tender.
Make this lifetime last forever.

Too much to ask,
too little to care.
Am I what you wanted or was I just there.

Repeat Pre-Chorus

Chorus:
You let me fall, fall, fall, for you, for nothing.
You let me fall, fall, fall, for you, again and again.

So they claim your gun shy,
but it's purely desire.
So plant your embers and start, start this fire.

Your words are cheap,
when no one's listening.
And I'll stand where my tears have been glistening.

Repeat Chorus

So I choke it down slow,
and savor the touch.
Cause we ended too fast,
and I care, care too much. (x2)

Repeat Chorus

Was I the one you were looking for,
or was, I the one that was standing at your door...
waiting for you.

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[Nick Pacifici]

I can really picture this being awesome with orchestration and jazzy guitar licks in the back ground. I really your music but I want to hear some happy stuff! GET HAPPY. But seriously i like it. Check out my music and let me know what you think!

[Jenny Cargill]

HAHAHA! Thanks. Yeah the songs I write with my sister are pretty deep... they are from poetry she wrote a long time ago (when she was in a dark place...lol) and I just rearrange and add a hook and a chorus, etc. I totally agree with you, I am not a dark person, but some of the stuff she writes is just too good to stay on paper. The Originals I have wrote on my own are more HAPPY, but just not as good LOL. Thanks for the feedback and listening. I'll take a listen to your stuff.