"Scream"- Spoken Word Poetry Slam
Uploader Comments (churchatbethany)
All Comments (14)
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great words of motivation~keep up the hope and sharing it. it takes mustards seeds from us all to make it happen. hope you get to swing again.
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Good stuff bro
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Great piece of longing and hope.....
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I dig your stuff
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Whoa...I feel so unworthy right now.
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This was very strong. Your word choice was very effective and the ending was amazing. You chose a good stinger.
The way you presented it, and your body language was really good also. Have you ever gone to a poetry slam? I haven't yet, but would love to sometime.
Anyways, would you like to read some of my stuff? I could always use feedback.
Thanks
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very nice flow. a true poet; spoken word artist! Visit me and tell me what u think of my piece, "the Bomb"...i know it needs work...i'm humble.
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Excellent job! This is beautiful and so full of great meaning.
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beautiful piece. am attempting to write some stuff myself, this is very inspirational, thank you.
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I really liked how you ended the poem.
That was amazing. My son loves it. May I put it on my myspace for a time?
Blessings,
Connie J
connieandmarkj 4 years ago
of course
churchatbethany 4 years ago