Cliche love song with no title (Original) - Siobhan Morris

Original song by me with no actual title yet. GIVE ME SUGGESTIONS.
please don't laugh at me or i'm going to cry
I know it's really cliche but seriously just help me out ok. CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM. luv u all.


Verse 1:
I once thought that I could
be the one you fantasize about
Drinking tea by the sea
hearing birds sing about
sweet memories

I realized that we shouldnt
bcause I know you werent
good enough for me
good enough for meee

CHORUS:
tell me boy why
the sun goin rise in the morning
tell me why oh why
the sun gon set in the evening

why do birds fly
are they ever sad? do they ever cry?
why do leaves fall in the fall?
and love never lasts at all

Verse 2:
Beauty lies in everything
even in the pen without ink
Flowers wilt eventually
leaving you means more time for me

shattered glass can never be fixed
what makes you think that i can?
lost is lost; wont be regained
useless is useless its all the same

CHORUS


Bridge:
Speckles of water
they made my eyesight clearer
"you were the one for me"
I thought to myself secretly

you ripped up paper
threw me in the water
now where are you where are you
i need you now where are you?

CHORUS

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[meetotheguel]

Why dont you marry me now and call me yours? :(

[siobhan911]

@meetotheguel I'm gonna marry you and call you mine okk <3

[AMXOOO]

I KNOW!!! call it thelovesong. :O im a genius :L xx

[siobhan911]

@AMXOOO ohh Annemarie :'-) that's the same as cliche love song but without the cliche bit!

[KhairulIkhwan23]

Omg Great song! :D

[siobhan911]

@KhairulIkhwan23 thank you!! :-)

[vnagalvez]

aiyyoooo siobhan soo pro izzit :) ang galing mo tlguh :)

[hugoboss123321]

Omg i love this song i am just amazed...for a title "love of sweet memories" :) gg in JIS idol today just amazing :)

[siobhan911]

@kevinsargunaraja I have tons of them, but none are good HAHA that sounds good!! thank you kev1nz :-)

[siobhan911]

@163thea ni ai wo!!! HAHAHAHAH wo ai ni bebz <3

[siobhan911]

@iieevv thank you :-)