Gotta Tell Her [A Nick Jonas Story] intro and Chapitre 1

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Uploaded by on Jan 17, 2009

ok here it goes my first Fanfic and i'm keeping this one this time lol
comment tell me if its bad or not but be harsh because i wanna know if its good but yea... ignore the video its from the original fanfic i didn't want to make another one and i wanted this song on there too so yea the song is I Must Be Dreaming by The Maine
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Elizabeth(aka liz and lizzy to nick)- golden blonde hair, ocean blue eyes, doesn't care what other think of her, she goes with the flow, her best friends are Nick, Joe, Kevin, and Samantha, she loves music and plays the flute in school, shes has a huge crush on Tony this guy in her science class, she doesn't know it but deep down inside she is falling for Nick.
Nick(aka knicks to Liz), Joe, and Kevin- you should know them
Samantha(aka Sam)- wavy light brown hair, green eyes, shes a cheerleader and very peppy, plays the clarinet in school with Liz,same friends as Liz but is dating Joe for almost a year now,

My name's Nick, me and Lizzy (her name is actually Elizabeth but i call her Lizzy), have been friends ever since we shared our crayons in kindergarden. We do almost everything together, we walk from and to school together, we hang out after school everyday, if we can't hang we text or talk on the phone together.
But for about a year now i've liked her i don't know if its love but for sure its a like. It was ever since her father died in a plane crash. That day is when i realized it, the day she ran to my house and cried herself to sleep in my arms, she looked so beautiful and peaceful there in my arms but i haven't gotten up the nerve to tell her, the only people who know are my brothers Joe and Kevin and Samantha (her other best friend as she puts it), i don't really wanna tell her because we might mess up our friendship and i don't think i could live with that then. Today is Saturday and i was walking over to her house we usually just to nothing on saturdays but we we're going to the race park with everyone today. she opened the door and hugged me. and i smiled at her.
Liz:"Hey Knicks" she calls me that because there was this time where i kicked everything and all oh never mind!
Nick:"Hey Lizzy ready for the racepark today!"
Liz:"yeah ready for me to kick you butt!" she started laughing and then we walked out the door back to my house where we met up with Joe and Sam making out on our couch they have gone out for about almost a year now...
Liz:"get a room guys!!"
Sam:"oh sorry guys" she got up and went to go get Kevin
Kevin:"k guys ready?"
Nick:"shyea man!" i was to excited because at the race park they have a multiple of things that me and Lizzy can do together and i think today is gonna be the day i tell her how i fell

We arrive at the park and we pay for our tickets and wait in line.
Liz:"oh my gosh!! its Tony!" thats the guy she likes in our science class ugh i hate him, he's head of the soccer team and all the girls fall for him and Lizzy is stuck under his spell.
Liz:"How do I look guys!"
Sam:"you look fine girlie i don't understand why you like him so much he can be such a jerk"
oh i totally second that.... as soon as he saw her he said her name and she went over to him.
Nick:"Why!" when she left i felt as thought i didn't exsist she just left, just like that!
Joe:"Dude this is why we keep telling you to go after her, she's not gonna be there for ever"
Sam:"yeah seriously i know she likes him alot but you gotta do something before she taken"
Nick:"i know guys but i don't know how to do it, i don't know if she likes me like that back and i don't wanna ruin our friendship"
Joe:"well at least tell her how you fell ok?"
Nick:"fine!"
Ugh!!! she is talking forever with that jerk...
Sam:"Nick settle down seriously you look like you going to shoot someone in the face!"
Nick:"sorry but they are taking so long!"
then thats when she walked back to us
Liz:"hey guys guess what!?!"
Oh no i hope its not what i think it is!
Everyone:"what?!"
Liz:"Tony.....

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ahh!!! what is she going to say??
hopefully people will start reading my story and i'll post more i'll post more if i get more views and more sub (lol i know i just started but i want some subs here people!) but i am writeing the second chapter right now

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  • hahaha. im re-reading.....!!!

  • haha i didn't really like this series it wasn't all that good

  • oh

    my

    gawddd

    this is so cute :)

  • ^-^ thanks it gets better so i've heard

  • omg these are so good. and trust me when i got my first comment i cried. im going to advertise you on my stories too!!!!!! please if you have time-read mine!

  • ^-^ i'm thanking you with a bushel of thankds in my thankinga abilities!! if that makes sense lol i'm gonna read your riiiiiggghhhtttt!!! now!!! ahh!! lol but i'll advertise yours too because i bet its better than mine ^-^

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  • wow too cute i love it

  • lol. it was your first. of course it wasnt. have you seen love games...it sucks hard!!! lol

  • I LOVE IT!!!!

  • sounds awesome!

    can't wait to read more!:)

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