http://www.myspace.com/louisgiannone Lou Giannone, and I were inspired to write and record a song in the vain of vintage Van Halen. This is the result of that collaboration. Lyrics : Step right up! Enjoy the show! Got a little story to tell ya'll Here we go!!! : The world as we know it is tearing at the seams All is fair in love & war and freedom ain't no dream The land of the free? Ha! More like home of the slave Grab you a shovel, let's dig your grave " Hey man you're killing me! " You shape the things to come for tomorrow So you get what you pay for We'd not steal, beg nor borrow We shall cover the cost in the Land of the Lost With a sleestak hissin' ? No time to listen! Land of the Lost This ain't no prison We're on a mission! Ahh!!! Mother Earth stuffed in a dress tailored by chemical routines, custom fit, ozone, frills, nylons turned green She's wearin' that face again The smile turned upside down Let's shake her up and clean that gown Common girl! I'll help you with that frown Ha!!! We'll shape the things to come for tomorrow So ya get what we pay for We'd not steal, beg nor borrow We shall cover the cost in the Land of the Lost No ass kissin' Just hit and no missin' Land of the Lost This is our livin' and our vision Ahh!!( solo) We'll shape the things to come for tomorrow Ha! We'll not beg steal nor borrow We shall cover the cost in the Land of the Lost With a sleestak hissin'? No time to listen! Land of the Lost This ain't no prison We're on a mission! Uh Huh!, Ha!!!
Not bad dude! Lyrics need help but you can definitely shred!
bnn82496 1 month ago
@bnn82496 Thanx a million. Have a great one!
aaronbergAPB 1 month ago
To be honest I'll break it down into 2 catagories: Musically very good, lyrically a mess.
Strngs012 7 months ago
@Strngs012 Thanx for the words here. I would agree, we'd done it quckly.
aaronbergAPB 5 months ago 2
This song has unique qualities. Superb timing, writing, guitar playing, vocals, and overall sound. Since you made it a tribute to Van Halen, a few similarities can be heard to Light Up The Sky, Loss of Control, Bullethead, Girl Gone Bad, and others; however, your skills at composing rock-solid originals can be heard above all else. Enjoyable, interesting, and worth listening to again and again. Thank you for sharing.
schismc 1 year ago 3
@schismc Thanx a bunch on the comment here. I'm in tremendous transition and I'm not online much anymore. Too many IRL circumstances to see through. I truly appreciate your kind words and wish you all the very best in 2011. Regards, ApB
aaronbergAPB 1 year ago 2