Coldplay "Speed of Sound"(instrumental), with lyrics I wrote 3
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It's actually a nice attempt, but I much prefer the original lyrics (no offense) and you should work on some of the phrasing, like when you say "the road is blocked by the greed which blocks the light".
Still, good job!
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All Comments (34)
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0:55 music playing, you don't say?
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EPIC FAIL
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@mathewjmusic Don't hate. I'm sure I'm not the only one douche.
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@ANCLAFACE Lyrics fail +1.
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@mathewjmusic Don't choke on your idiocy.
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@mathewjmusic Naw, really? Damn. You're very smart.
Obviously jack ass, they're the creators of it.
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@Rubenmon1 ok, im sorry i see what you were trying to do, you were giving your own meaning to the song i never saw that before
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lovelyyyy
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@SuperLittlebigyoutub its his/her own lyrics dumbass
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The instrumental I would give an A.
The lyrics though, I'd give a B- ; the words themselves are very good, but they like Christian said, they wouldn't go well with the beat. Try to cut or change some of the words to make it more in time.
lovemeordie83 10 months ago
@lovemeordie83 yeah, i had rushed on them... but i have change some of them to go smoothly ;)
Rubenmon1 10 months ago
you fail in the lyrics
ANCLAFACE 1 year ago 13
@ANCLAFACE Make one using the instrumental if you think you can make better lyrics.
Rubenmon1 4 months ago