Murder, He Wrote

This is my second short film. It won best picture and best screenplay awards at a small local amateur film festival. Enjoy!

Category:

Film & Animation

Tags:

• Arik Shahzadeyan Murder
• He Wrote
• Writer's block
• Short film
• Film
• Drama
• Lack of inspiration
• Murder
• Murder He Wrote

[bigdintel]

Yeah, this was pretty terrible acting.

[arichok76]

@bigdintel well, this was an amateur project among friends. the performers had hardly any acting experience and they had never done film before. in any case, i'll pass your message on to them! ;)

[funkyfreshfee]

the shining!

[arichok76]

@funkyfreshfee i hope that is a compliment! :) i watched The Shining once, almost 20 years ago, and don't remember in detail what it was about! but now that you mentioned it, i think you may have a point there. so i guess i need to re-watch it! :)

[templarsworld]

Well acted, nice direction and nice cinematography. Constructive criticism: The typewriter is such an in-your-face anachronism that it really draws attention away from the drama and to itself like if he was suddenly using a crank phone or a telegraph.

[arichok76]

@templarsworld thanks, templarsworld! i agree with you that the typewriter is totally out of line. but the whole film was a farce anyway so it didn't matter that much in the end... you should also know that the festival i participated in required the film to be around 3 and a half minutes (which is why everything happens so quickly) and to be built upon three words/concepts: "cushion", "planet" and "lacking in conscience". thanks for watching!

[fathairyarab]

u should try it the other way round where she strangles him.

[trubaduren77]

shit clipp 

[onesockjack1999]

@niznaszak it doesn't work, ur just a spammer trying to get popular on youtube, but actually just gonna get hated!!!