Remember Me Always//OneShot *Writers Contest*

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Uploaded by on Apr 3, 2010

Hope you like it :D
This is a one shot real close to my heart and as well my 2nd contest entry... :D
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I shivered because the cold wind hit my face as i entered the dark, quiet room. My shoe-sole rubbing agianst the marble flooring was the only sound heard. I inhaled deeply as i took 2 steps more before coming to a complete stop. Its been quite a while since i last saw this room.....and her....

3 years 10 months and 16 days to be exact. 3 years 10 months and 16 days since she left me.....alone..

The room was covered with white sheets all over. She told me that it was so that things don't get destroyed...I think it is so to preserve the memories that reside in here...

These familiar walls which held her meaning of life were now dusty...
The window from which the first ray of the sun would enter, waking her up afresh, was now closed...
The matress where she wud lay on when she was exhausted or when she gave up or was simply sleepy, was now torn...
The smallest corners that wud light up whenever she entered this room were now covered with spider webs..

She was my everything- My Best Friend, my Mother sometimes, my Enemy, my 'Better Half'...my definition?

A TWIN SISTER

My hand travelled through my hair,unknotting it as i bit my bottom lip, trying to hold back my tears which were now coating my eyes. I blinked twice as the water droplets came trickling down my cheek and then rolled onto the cold marble floor.
I slowly walked over to the side table where lay an old, dusty box. I sighed as i put it on the matress. My hands were trembling as i tried to open the lid.
Inside the box, i found an old album which contained all our precious memories and the toys with which we played when we were merely 10. Amongst these, i found a small piece of paper labelled my name, written in an elegant handwriting which i once envied and now missed...

I saw our pictures one by one as memories rushed back to me....
The day she got selected for ballet
Then the day i broke my ankle and she missed her party to nurse me even though i was strong enough to take care of myself and also we were of the same age.
Then there was the night of Christmas when she got my favorite guitar and i got her so longed camera...that day we first learnt how to actually live together...
Then the Thanks giving dinner when she cried as she missed our mom.

By the end of the album, i was in tears. She loved me, I loved her....
Life was harsh on us.

As i went through the toys, I found myself chuckling softly as i saw her favorite toy 'Mr. Broken Leg' which, as a matter of fact, was still working.
Moving further, i opened the piece of paper revealing her elegant handwriting again except this time it was smudged....she must be crying when she wrote it...

" Dear Rachael,
If you ever find this box and this paper, please read it if anything.

I Love You.
I might have not told you this in person but i want you to kno that i always have and always will. All those times that i shouted and taunted you was just because i cared for you way too much. We are of the same age, I know, but i've always wanted you to take a safe road to life and so i always took the first step.
I'm right now in the hospital room writing this while you're at the doc's cabin begging for my survival. I know i'm gonna die...and there is no chance for me to make it and so i want to give you something to remember me.
I'm gonna tell you the reason i didn't let you drive the car you wanted to as we had decided you would, on the other half..but then during the journey, i realized that the brakes had failed and so i insisted on driving because i knew that if i hadn't, you would be here in my place. I couldn't take it.

I know that i'm not leaving on a happy note but its too late. I hope you turn 21 and marry Seth as we planned you will without mourning over my death.

Here i am, 18, wanting you to know how I feel right now but i'm possibly not that strong..
I'm sorry...I love you..

REMEMBER ME ALWAYS

- LOVE MONICA"
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{fingers crossed}

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  • Oh my gosh! That was amazing so sad and heartfelt

    I hope you get into the contest you deserve it completey : )

  • It's amazing!! Like seriously.

    I'm keeping my fingers crossed for you... and for myself too... (:

    But really, you did great

    loved it bb

  • Aw, that was really sad...

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