Shooting Stars (Original) by Romeo M Song

This is an original song I wrote. I hope you guys like the song. Rate and Comment please :D

Verse 1
see how they glow
even when falling
watch as they shine on
All alone tonight
watching the heavens
wishing our worlds would collide
where are you now
what are you thinking
you're all that's on my mind

Pre-Chorus
so close your eyes
just like I'm doing
baby I'm by your side

Chorus
Remember the nights we'd stay up together
Our first kiss, which seemed to last forever
feeling at home when I'm drowning in your arms
I close my eyes and see you in my dreams
reach out my hand to pull you close to me
can't wait to make love to this reality
You're all that I wish for on shooting stars

Verse 2
Replay those times
retrace my footsteps
bring myself back to you
breathe in this moment
take a few pictures
make this a memory that lasts
don't know whats in store
but all I know is
you'll be waiting at the end

Bridge
Even when all the lights are fading
I'll still be your
Cause I've never truly loved before,
or will after you

Category:

Music

Tags:

• Shooting
• Stars
• Romeo
• Song
• RomeoMSong
• Original
• Acoustic
• Ovation
• Roundback
• composition

[IcyBluAngel]

<3 I kinda think this is my favorite one Ang! I LOVE IT... =D

Stop being so good at everything. =b

[crzer07]

Good stuff Romeo lol, I've seen you with a guitar but but never seen you write songs and sing. Been quite awhile I guess, and being the recluse individual that I am this should prompt me to start my own musical endeavors hahaha.

[Closure777]

I liked it :] i really did. Its cute haha. Some of your melodies and lyrics were quite good.

Word of advice though, watch your meter. The rhythm on lyrics is quite important. (example: "all alone tonight" sort of throws you off in the verse, which can be handy when used right. but here i feel like a stronger feel could help) The chorus is good up until the last line.

Other than that just be careful :] you've got some songwriting skill, really!

[thelittleone24]

your lyrics have always been beautiful.

little B

[tigger000]

haha, were they dirty tears?

[XxDirtyPiratexX]

Romeo that was beautiful it brought tears to my eyes :)