The Yellow House (part one)

this is the first part of my sequence of poems called "The Yellow House". It's a sort of narrative sequence of poems. About a gay love affair, living in London, living in Sweden and travelling by train.

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[irisheyes4you]

being a poetry fan, I loved your poems. Just found your channel today, so going to subscribe, great poems.

[eddusfledermaus]

thank you so much! I've got one more video in this sequence, after that I'll be recording some single pieces, much more poetry to come!

[fetchmemyaxe]

im not a massive fan of poetry; yet i loved this, especially the fragmented nature of the piece. It feels like memories resurfacing.

[eddusfledermaus]

aw, thank you! I'm pleased you liked it! I was worried people would find it a bit confusing.

[PatchworkPorpoise]

Beautiful. I want to smile and weep at the same time!

[eddusfledermaus]

aww, thank you! I'm so pleased you liked it!

[theripper7675]

great poem

[tiesarefun]

-begins to cry hysterically-

i think i have indeed found another amazingly beautiful/creative/DID I SAY AWESOME/wonderful channel, becuz you are not only an awesum writer ur an AWESUM WRiter

-punches the subscribe button like my life depends on it- ^_^

[TheBrokenGentleman]

*sips tea* ♥

[davis911228]

I don't think it is the slightest bit confusing. I think it's relatively literal at times. It sounds like journal entries. It's good and has a nice rhythm. It's the performance that sells it. It looks like you made an extra effort to make this video somber.