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Uploaded by on Dec 22, 2009

The sun shone today
It's amber, warm rays
down down to the ground
warming the sound
the sights everywhere
vibrancy in the air
like something that's awakened
unabaten, unshaken,
and it's something so simple
so clean, uncomplicated
breathe the clean air
i know you can take it
be and not fake it
and yet hey ok then
stand in the wind
on the back porch door
nothing special about it
too simple to doubt it
just a beautiful day
ordinary every way
with the sunshine even rain
and to hear it once again
i know just what it's saying
it's calling your name

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  • you're a fab poet and a wonderful reader. I'm awaiting your one man show around the indie theatres. The magic and madness deserve no less and if this Exposure Anxiety cat can climb that mountain, you can, if you wish to.

  • That's great encouragement, thank you.

  • Beautiful poem! i liked the part of vibrancy in the air. It seemed to go well, like the energy of the sun shining on the Earth and making everything on the Earth come alive. Thanks for reading. :)

    Happy holidays! :)

  • thnx, happy holidays 2 u also

  • feels like springtime! beautiful man!

  • i was trying to post this on solstice, but i was 2 sleepy

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  • It was a beautiful Solstice.'Tis a beautiful poem.5 * * * * *

  • thnx. i do have a free ebook if you are interested, cameron. check out my video "good morning".

  • On sunday it was cloudy up here was both sunrise and sunset the entire day. orangy pink just before 1:00pm when the sun was at it's peak=)

    Great poem Oz, thanks

  • Aw you're welcome =)

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