Dramatic Monologue

Good one ! I suggest you link this to DynamycDesi site - you can win awards for your talent there.

Thanks for the tip and nice comment. I will!!! :-)

hey good work! Check out my monologue and let me know what you think! Thanks.

It seemed a bit happy to be a dramatic monologue...

?????????? listen, just because ur upset that ur not as good, and never will be, isn't any reason to put down another talented actress

gr8

im not trying to be mean, but are you jewish. also at the end, you said all the color was drained from you dads lips. how did they do that, and why

I'm Catholic by birth but part jewish from my mother's side by a couple of generations, so I have sensitivity in the jewish people. I love them. Where I mentioned "the color was drained from his lips..." meant that he felt sick and was mortified that his daughter had to encounter such hate and discrimination. It would be enough to make anyone want to throw up to tolerate such discrimination.

Hey, Sarah. I like it! I see the slightly "cheery" beginning as the character's efforts to keep a positive mindset, but finding that reality is just too overwhelming in the end. I personally think it's a good transition. I'd love to see more!

Thanks, Carl!:)