Miss Your Smile -- Original
Uploader Comments (lisadvet)
Top Comments
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outstanding. and RIP to your cousin
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really nice song
RIP your cousin
All Comments (23)
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omg!!! ur awsomee!!
i wish i could write
a song as good as yours!!!
U'VE GOT A BIG FAN HERE!!
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Great stuff.
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What a great voice!
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me gustan tus temas ,no comprendo bien las letras pero la melodia vocal la encuentro preciosa al igual que tu voz ,que dominas bien ,no pares de tocar , cantar,y componer,aprovecha la juventud que es una fuente genial de inspiracion , la llama se apaga rapido .salud
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That was awsome! You are definitly something special. I keep thinking to myself "I should download this on my ipod" but you dont have a record yet! I'm sure you will have one soon though! Good luck on everything!
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The vocal is powerful and clear and looking into your eyes there is definitely somebody home. The lyrics are pro worthy.
However, the delivery for this song is wrong. It sounds angry and hurt rather than perhaps wistful and pained. So you need to reconsider your interpretive approach to it. The vocal melody is a little weak, especially in the beginning, but a full rock arrangement might cover for that.
The guitar playing was urgent and echoed the conviction of your vocal. Good job.
Wow... usually I don't like this type of music... his is so different, it doesn't sound like every other roc/pop song out there. Its great and its an original. Not many people can do that. You should put it out on record. you've got a lot of talent, i'd definitely help you if i could... i showed a couple of my friends and it didn't surprize me that they also loved it!
cat02137 3 years ago
thank you so much!
lisadvet 3 years ago
Lets see if I can put this in perspective... my usual listening tastes include death metal, melodic death metal, power metal... basically alot of heavy stuff.
Now after saying that, I'll say this is one of the neatest original songs I've ever come across. You've got alot of talent, definitely something I'd like to see more of. :) You should put out some mp3s of recorded songs, that would help spread the word. I know I'd help to spread it.
BowserBoy 3 years ago
thanks i'm glad you like it! im working on a little recording setup just need a couple more things so hopefully i'll have some mp3's out after christmas time. meanwhile i'll be working on some new stuff. youtubin' it etc.
lisadvet 3 years ago