Sample to my very first Machinima!

Ok, so this is my first time making a Machinima, so its not awesome like other machinima out there. I still have some editing to do, but I jsut want your feedback, so please comment below and rate. THANK YOU TO MY SUBSCRIBERS! I PROMISE AN AMV SOON!

Category:

Entertainment

Tags:

• brawl
• machinima
• test

[195209]

Hmm...well to start the person voice acting Lucario seemed to have the same problem others have which is putting their lips to the mic to close to it, though it isn't as bad as some I've seen and it only really lasted for like a few seconds of the beginning, the rest was alright as well as Ganon's VA.

A nice fade in would be a good thing to do at the start of the video, even though it's used A LOT it's better than showing a character straight away, though it doesn't HAVE to be a fade in...

[coolguy1257]

I appreciate tihs a lot. This ins't the beginning of the actual machinima, I plan to have a fade in or something else. Thanks for the advice.

[GAGFEST2000]

IT was really good :D the only bad parts where when it showed P1 and P2 but thats what everyone would say......voice acting needs to have less of a "talking to close to the mic" sound but that might just be my head set......well NE way i thought it was really good :)

[195209]

...except for that part where Lucario spoke a bit too close to the mic, but anyway all in all it was a nice sample to your first Machinima and I hope that you will do great on the final product.

I'm pretty much a amateur when it comes to rating things like this, so hopefully you'll get a expert to comment on your video.

I give this a 3 out of 5, though one more for effort, Good Luck.

[195209]

Adding on to that a nice fade out also widely used of course would be best to 'end' your video or used to signal that particular scene is done and what not.

The camera angles seemed alright, but it was a bit too zoomed in, but that's just how I feel and some of the movements was a bit...awkward like when Ganon was speaking and he stepped forward like three times which seemed a bit unnecessary.

Getting back to the VA's you and I guess your friend did well, I could hear you both fine..damn 500