Uploaded by crayZ4FanFics on Nov 25, 2009
I knew what I would see before I saw it. Me, lying dead on the flat surface of the wooden floor that was the base of the treehouse that hid my death. I walked up to the tree and leaned up against it, I was getting tired. It still scared the crap out of me that I could feel the rough bark against my chilled skin.
I climbed the small distance that it took for me to get up to the tree house. It wasn't far up. Maybe five feet above my head. So I was soon staring down at my limp body as I stood on the wood. My eyes drooped and I dropped down to my knees to examine my damage. Though it didn't matter. The damage had been done. It was to late to change anything, but hey I still want to know. My body was shirtless and shoeless. I still had my sweats on though. I had multiple lacerations as if from being thrown down a hill, which was quite equivalent to the beating I'd gotten. I winced in actual pain, I didn't even want to see my back. It was painful to remember all of the things he did to me. I remember perfectly how he threw me up against atleast a dozen tree's. My back must be completley destroyed. I moved some of the curls out of my face and I was so consumed in what was I doing that I didn't even get excited that I could touch stuff now. That I could make stuff move. I was pretty much real. But why now?
I ran my thumb across the swollen parts of my face. My face looked nothing like mine but it was me. Most of my body was purple or blue now from bruising. and there was red spots in places to.
Dirt and leaves had been glued to my skin with dried blood. I sighed. I looked horrible. I rested my hand on my dead bodies chest.
That's when I felt it. How I hadn't noticed this before was beyond me, but I felt a heart beat and I felt rising and collapsing in my chest from breathing. The side of my face went to the dried-bloody chest as I listened intently to the heartbeat. It was weak and I was having a hard time breathing. I was weazing like crazy. But none the less I was breathing. I couldn't even be excited. I was now on a mission.
I stood up after what seemed like hours. I just couldn't gather my strength. What's wrong with me? My knees were wobbling to bad and I knew I couldn't depend on my legs to get me down from this heighth, so I decided to jump. I had a feeling that it would hurt me. So I made my leap and landed on my feet and tumbled a few times. It didn't hurt even though I has jumped from about twelve feet. I suddenly was exhausted. Was it my body that was doing this or did I just need another few-days sleep? NO TIME FOR THAT! I'M ON A MISSION!
Because I was so weak I need to reassure myself. It took a lot of effort but I made myself stand then I turned around to my unconcious, but not dead, body. "I'll be back" I whispered as I made my way, Unsteadily, to Joe.
He was where I left him and I started to make my way to him but soon the ground came hurdling towards me. I was very dizzy and very week and I had no clue why. I was about 10 feet from him so I decided to crawl and it was easier than walking so I made it to him soon. I laid my head on his lap. He didn't react like I thought he would. He didn't react at all actually, not like he usually did to my touch. It was because I was so weak, I just knew it. I struggled, and when I say struggled I mean STRUH GULLED!, but got to me knee's. I put my hands on his shoulder and they didn't go through him. I moved my hand to his cheek. "Joe. . ." I whispered but he continuted to stare ,what seemed like, through me. and that's when I got the motivation I needed. Because I suddenly got this burst of intuation. If I could get Joe over to me and if I could get him to save me then I might have a chance with him and now I wasn't tired anymore. Well I still was but not was much. I bent down a little and kissed him and he gasped immedialtley. "Good boy." I said.
He chuckled. "Joe. . ." I continuted.
"Yes?" he asked breathless.
I was falling harder now, My eyes wouldn't say open and my whole body was shaking from struggling to stay upright and awake. "Treehouse, go to the treehouse." I pressed my forhead to his and that's when he stood up. He turned towards the treehouse though I don't know how he knew where it was. "Yes," I whispered. barely audible to my own self but he started walking. We were linked some how by mind. I felt I could relax now and that's what my body did. It was hard but I kept on eye open as I watched him approach my body. "Joe," I said to myself. "Don't let me die again." and that's when everything went dark.
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this sounds like a book i was reading"guradian angel"!!!! save him joe!
RailiJaklitch6 1 year ago
:-O cant......speak..suprized.....spechless
*passes out* POST ASAP PLZ!!!
Cathugger456 2 years ago
ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh im speechless!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!ahahah
lovemonkye 2 years ago
LOL I know! that's where I got the idea from! well and the movie 'Invisible'
crayZ4FanFics 2 years ago
next one please!!
maria69ish 2 years ago
wow, this is just amazing..
i need more!
EvaOuiCestMoi 2 years ago
i mean book/movie.. "the lovely bones"
videogirl123x 2 years ago
I love this story !
but it's just like this movie called "my lovley bones"
Post sooon please?
videogirl123x 2 years ago
post immidiately!!!!!!!!!! post ASAP!!!!!!
fastsport996 2 years ago
ahh!!!!
please post sooon!!!!
i love it!!!!
XjBstoryX 2 years ago