Triple Threat

The opening is a poem called escape which was written at 14, followed by a unique poem I discovered in my books, the three after "Acid", "Tick Tock", and "Out". Out was inspired by the script MILK by gus van sant. The structure of the three are taken from the first. Enjoy, at some point I'll edit better. These are previews of my poetry book called "Selective Hearing"

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• Elias Comfort
• Elias McConnell
• Elias Comfort McConnell
• poetry
• gravel road
• epiphany
• spoken word
• elephant
• paris je t'aime

[joethomas2009]

@ThisbeandPyramus I don't think you should comment on it in the way you did because you don't know him in any way. I am his sister, so I know what he had been through and why he did these poems and what they mean. so you have no right to call him names please. And no he is not lying how the heck would you know. (this comment is not in rude tone)

[ThisbeandPyramus]

ok- at the risk of sounding 'artsy dorky', I'll post my comment:

Tight, melodic and just obscure & ambiguous enuf to be compelling.

Really-the 1st part at 14? Precocious bastard.

Some references I don't catch, of course, but the words make the picture (outside the literal meaning) -swing

ever notice how Billie Holiday lagged behind the beat until you always winced...then BANG she was ON IT.?

That's what I like here the most. Almost lost - then - Bang, i get it.

Always left (not right)