Dragon Ball Helios Warriors episode 1

I've already seen many fanfics but this is my first time doing one so plz give me your opinion

English is not my native language therefore I apologize for any grammar mistakes

The musics are
Ameno- Era
Want out-Sonata Artica (opening)
and the others came from Fire Emblem

And an Happy New Year for eveyone !! ^^

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[xit111]

born in the milky way from different stars?

[Maximos4]

@xit111 yes, the milky way has many stars

[Mafiaptwarrock]

name of music 0.00 > 2.27 ??

[Maximos4]

@Mafiaptwarrock Ameno from Era

[SSJProtecter]

It's good, very original. You turned something form the show, the dragonballs, into your own original idea.

[Maximos4]

Thanks dude =)

[cam281993]

story is original writing could us some work ill check out the next few maybe it gets better

[davy2233]

name of music intro

[Solo718]

Overall it's excellent I'd have to agree with @MrSMBZ though the intro is a bit long

[MrSMBZ]

dude no offence to you or you're videos because there totally awsome but please make the intros shorter

[MrSMBZ]

@Mafiaptwarrock it's suppose to be like this 0:00 > 2:27

[iamhereforever]

@SSJProtecter actualy there is nothing from the show lol. those are gameplay records but not the cartoon