Ether Q - Dry Your Eyes (Produced by Swollen Drumz)
Uploader Comments (TheEtherQ)
Top Comments
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The beat is tight as fuck, i just can't hear what your saying. Your raps aren't loud enough, when you listen to the greats, their voice takes over the beats. And true hip hop is all in the lyrics. Your voice is getting lost in the beat
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haha way better then wayne !
All Comments (183)
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yo you need more...volume, but also swagger. im not talkin soulja boy, im sayin you should have morre passion and rythym.
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Warren G style flow, good shit keep real hip hop alive!!
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Really good, G funk flow style like Warren G, keep it up.!!!!
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wiikid tune blud . y dont u fck the usb mic off and get a simple + cheap dynamic job? + make ur own booth ? piece ov piss jus take a corner ov ur room , build a frame from floor 2 ceiling ( nothin 2 heavy ) and staple old duvets 2 it ! ROUTE UR MIC AND HEADPHONE IN AND ...... CHEK THE DIFFERANCE . KEEP IT UP MAIN
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nice beat, but i don´t really much... but its very cool when the voice of a woman go singing!! Than i like it much!
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I'm sure you'll get a better studio next time, as I agree with everyone else that I can't hear you, but great otherwise. But your rapping seems to be really good when I can hear it. I'll rate it 4 stars.
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the beat is nice. i couldnt really hear te words but when i read the lyrics they were good. but you did say you didnt have a good mike to work with. but try to speak a little louder too, but i understand you dont want to lose the mood of the song. and did you choke at 2:15-2:16 lol. i think you did it on purpose though.
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yo the beat is nasty but the "LYRICS"... needs more work...so overall... ima give you a 5 outa 10.... so thats better then zero...
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This!
i had to read the lyrics throughout, good song though
i can relate to the usb mic. i gotta headset too right now.
work on your delivery. like not shout on the mic but feel your words when spittin
peace
dahrealwolfman 2 years ago
Yeah the usb isn't the best but it's what I had to start. I'm not blaming the mic 100% for the delivery but because the mic is not professional I can't work with my voice the way I want to but I have a studio I can work at for free so I should be getting a lot of quality tracks out very soon!
TheEtherQ 2 years ago
Dude that is a great song! You just need to put more force in your voice like KRS-One. If you did that the song will be the bomb! It has a great hook too. You definitely have promise. :)
DotChannel 2 years ago
Thanks a lot! Yeah it was actually the first song I ever recorded so I was still figuring it all out and the mic doesn't allow me to use my voice how I want to. If I start fluctuating it pops and skips but since I've found a studio hopefully it'll all get fixed!
TheEtherQ 2 years ago
Dope...But a little constructive criticism...Work on your delivery...The mic is not something to be hesitant...shy...passive on.
And if you are reading off something...Don't...Remember your lines...It will help you to spit more freely.
Nice beat...Nice lyrics...Just spit from the heart and you should be fine.
tekken000 2 years ago
Appreciate the advice a lot. Yeah this was the first song I ever recorded and I'm learning that it is 100 times better to memorize it. I'm gonna be getting into a studio hopefully sometime next week and I've got this song memorized and it's gonna be on pro equipment so hopefully I can make something real hot.
TheEtherQ 2 years ago