Student Action Film: The Spider 1
Uploader Comments (Kwamu22)
All Comments (10)
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Hey I am from the Usha Pravin Gandhi College Of Management, Mumbai, India..i really liked your film..We have an international short film making competition in our fest 'Aahan' coming up soon..Pls let me know if you are interested to participate..Waitin for your response!!
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Sound effects and other effects...need to improvise...but the scripts...great...love it...you can actually redo it...^^...well...all the best...keep up...and don't give...
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Really good for a student film, dude. Good script and action choreography. If you can do this as a student, perhpas you can do much better with a bigger budget. You need to work on the sound, though.
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I like student films, including yours. I give this a 4/5. Decent lighting and visual editing. Sound is where these films need work. Dialogue/acting still feels too scripted. Overall, good work in progress, keep developing it.
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This is not bad for 2003, then it means your recent work (if you have any) should be pretty pretty awesome.
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The sound effects werent very realistic
and i cant really comment on the acting cuz i couldnt really hear it
but the diaologue that i did hear was pretty good
i think that if you were to redo this, or make a new video with better sound effects, and editing that was... lessy tacky It would look pretty good
practice makes perfect, so keep making more!
Man, so 1970's. Yeah baby. Rock on. The audio during the conversation is a little low, and during the action, a little loud. Other than that. Nice work.
Dartagnan79 4 years ago
Thanks, dude.
Kwamu22 4 years ago