Update on the melody idea, just wanted to get the feel with the music little more rockin. "live" demo in my little garage studio. 123 bpm. dropped the key 1/2 step (no range) this is as close as I can get to a "live" full band performance, these are all 1 takers straight through so forgive the slop.
its cool, but get a band....it add more characteristics
greenassskateboard 1 year ago
is this sparta? o what homes.
ganjagladiator 2 years ago
im not even into this kind of music, but your a very good musician so well done good song :)
alexbassmaster 3 years ago
Hooks galore...
GalleriaGhoul 3 years ago
I love the concept, i think you'd do better without the 'oooh's and 'yeah's though. Like sorryseed said, it's got a third eye blind kind of feel at the beginning of the chorus but then carries off towards a weezer-eqsue wall of sound.
mostlyshookup 3 years ago
If you put a guitar solo in there right at the end of the video, yours would automatically win.
Nikkogino 3 years ago
Bears a slight resemblence to 'Simple Kind of Life' -- which is no problem at all by me. Awesome job!
myelfmyself 3 years ago
Fantastic!
ChaoticSense 3 years ago
good idea for the verse melody. personally, i think i'd do away with the sickly "yeah"s and add some more words, but it could work either way. only thing i'd say is that the chorus sounds like a completely different song.
devinforpresident 3 years ago
i like it, but it got all third eye blindish around the 1 min mark
sorryseed 3 years ago