You've got credible points on headline construction. To humiliate pro copywriters, though, you need more than headlines. I'm referring to:
1.Brevity - You could've said in five words what you did in twelve.
2.Points grouping - your points were OK, but were all over the place. You gave a commentary while presenting a point. Distracting!
3.Claim validity - How exactly did you humiliate pro copywriters? Claims must be validated, and I didn't hear any. And yes, there are more points to consider.
You've got credible points on headline construction. To humiliate pro copywriters, though, you need more than headlines. I'm referring to:
1.Brevity - You could've said in five words what you did in twelve.
2.Points grouping - your points were OK, but were all over the place. You gave a commentary while presenting a point. Distracting!
3.Claim validity - How exactly did you humiliate pro copywriters? Claims must be validated, and I didn't hear any. And yes, there are more points to consider.
kitchensinkcleaner 3 years ago
Hi Ed
I must checkout your video series in the Immediate Edge, your videos always look cool. Also great info.
Rob
keatir 3 years ago
Thanks for the great info on headlines and copywriting. Costa Rica Channel
CostaRicaChannel 3 years ago