600! WOW. I cant thank you enough (: thanks for the comments; it motivates me to keep writing. (heart) This chapter has two flashbacks between the [[ ]]]; so bare with me please (: Sorry if I havent posted in five days; school is just being gay with me. Btw you seriously need to download homecoming by hey Monday! Im addicted to that song J And, for the dirty-minded, (ha!) talk to me, and Ill tell you about my dirty writer friend. :p put cheese somewhere in your comment if you read this all. &&talk to me sometime? I bite. D:
[next day. after school]
"He didn't Erica, he didn't follow me," I whimpered while my head rested over Erica's lap. We've been like this for an hour now, just me chattering while she listened, caressed my hair and handed me tissues every six minutes. Happiness for Brittany Lewis can just be described with a name composed by three letters; it goes like this: J-O-E. Simple as that. It's even funny how in a second I transported myself, all the long way, from blue and peaceful heaven, to loathed, despised and dark hell.
"You're just.." she started to say, first in a firm voice, but suddenly becoming weaker as if regretting was she was going to say. I looked up at her with watery eyes, waiting for a continuation to the sentence. She glanced between the room, but finally she took a deep breath and continued. "You're just being dramatic, Britt. It's not like he's not doing what he always used to---"
[["Mom! We're late!" I yelled from downstairs. Mom came rushing down the stairs with her pajamas on. "I'm sorry honey," she apologized, "My work starts at nine today."
"Aren't you taking me to school?"
She rolled her eyes, not really willing to do so. "Where's that Jonas kid?" she said, instead.
"He.." didn't stop by my house this morning as usual, he doesn't want to talk me: fail. "..sick"
"Then I guess you'll just have to walk," she sternly said, giving her back to me and heading upstairs again. ]]
".. and it's not like he has ignored you all day.."
[[While walking down the hallway to my next class with Erica by my side, my eyes stopped at Joe, who was leaning on the lockers and flashing shiny white smiles to everyone that passed by his side. I quickly fixed my bangs, and pretended to laugh at what Erica was saying, (which by the way, I wasn't listening). My laughs got Joe's attention, making him look at us. I looked at him, right in time to see him turn around and walk away; completely ignoring me.]]
".. I bet he's on hell now without you," she finally said.
"Let's hope.." I said hopelessly before blowing my nose with another tissue. Just then, my phone began ringing. My hands flew to my pocket and my voice cheered up, thinking it was Joe. To my surprise, it wasn't him. It was Mrs. Richards. My mood was definitely not up to handle that kid, so I came up with the cheap excuse of a broken ankle. When finished, I stared at my phone, knowing that I only wanted to get a job for a new phone. The money was almost complete, the phone was almost in my hands, but not even that could force a little smile out of me. I was doleful, grieved, and slapdash no matter what. Not even a good book, which would be most likely my priority, will make me exultant now. My only wish now, I mean, my only need now will be Joe and his clumsiness. Joe and his cheerful smile, and those irresistible lips that my body, mind and soul desired for.
I grunted as Erica stretched to get the control remote. "This will make you feel better," she imparted. She started flipping through channels while my eyes just stared at the screen. The doorbell of my house began ringing, breaking my concentration. I made my languorous way to the door, and as the door flew open, I just stared in disbelief as the figure standing right in front of my eyes.
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whowhowhowhowho?
oooh clifff hangerrr.
Cheese. (: . x
Kiakovvy 2 years ago
Maybe its Joe, or no. Nick!
CHEESE :D
myzzrockerchicxoxo 2 years ago
oh nick or joe :P mmm
and cheese ;)
Annecb349 2 years ago
well you see my friend and i CHEckEd for SomE things and all...
see what i did there!!!
lol it makes no sense
avrilrocks111 2 years ago
wow i wonder who it is
plz post more
its addicting
pink297 2 years ago
:D this is goood.
not cheesy at all yet.
keep it coming. and i love it btw.
teddiiee08 2 years ago
nooo u have to put moree
longachany 2 years ago
omg its joe!!!!!!! or is it....... hmmmmm.... cheese..... ya that was an awsome chapter!! i wanna kno whos at the door!!
luckiducki321 2 years ago
ALMOST THERE PEOPLE!
i NEED moreeee :D
xoaleegatorxo 2 years ago
its either joe or nick XD haha!!! please next one soon =D it's almost 70 comments XD
addicted2jobros 2 years ago