Justin Velte - "Broken and Betrayed"

This is the first full origonal song I've posted up here I think. In addition to this being the first full origonal song for me to post up here its also the first one in which I have done vocals as well. Let me know what you think.

Justin

myspace.com/dbdleadguitar

The song is also going to be posted on my music myspace:

myspace.com/justinveltemusicsite

Lyrics:

I sit alone
In this darkened cage
Broken and Betrayed
The sun is rising up
To meet the day
At day break I will hang

I will hang

There is nothing left for me

My hands and feet are bound
By these chains
Freedom is now gone
Dawn has broke accross the land
The gaurds will be here soon
To take me away

The silence is broken
Footsteps comming my way
How could you do this to me?
Why?

One last time
I'll whisper your name
As I swing
From the gallows

I feel no hate
Betrayal isn't new to me
This is my fate
Just let me hang
From the gallows

Just let me hang

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• Justin Velte
• Broken and Betrayed
• Melodic Death Metal
• Metal
• Amon Amarth
• Guitar Solo
• Awesome
• Fly
• Superior Drummer 2.0
• Line 6 Toneport
• Ibanez
• Peavey
• Music

[DownSouthable]

drums need to be way louder.

but overall its awsome nice job

[chicoice321]

i wish i knew you i could bring so much to this band in terms of screaming

[UnholySupremacy2]

I agree, your vocals are good, but try a little harder to growl from your diaphram to get that little bit of extra power

[newamerikangospel]

Good stuff man! If I can say (my opinion) I would push a little more (from the diaphram) vocally. Mix wise compress the crap out of the vocals and do a high pass at about 500. It will help clear them up. But overall good stuff.

[meghanthemetalqueen]

Awesome!

[RavenShadow77]

carry on you are coming along beautifully...never allow your gifts to fall to the wayside nor let anyone sway you...well done