My Heart by Frank O'Hara
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beautiful
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that was great
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@teamcrumb I agree. I didn't mean sarcastic. Thanks -- you put it better than I did.
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@sweens1026 frank o hara was not being dry or droll when he read any of his stuff. its from the heart and he is as interested in language as any of poet, he just doesn't use intellectualisms for the sake of them. he saw the poem in the day he had lived, and wrote about it in that daily tone. and chose not to put his words into a more powerful or divisive format, i guess he knew full well not deluding yourself is partly all a poet owes his or her self to write well
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@JakeDonaghue its just fine as it is, conversational.
conversational is not morose or maudlin. and plenty of sylvia's poems are happy as an eye should be. personally i'm glad the reader doesn't perform it
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Good poem: good reading.
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@TheGreatTrashy lol Cool
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@qbone20 i love frank, too!
Your reading could be a little drier (dryer? more dry?)... in my opinion. The way O'Hara reads "Having a coke with you", you get the feeling it's not total bullshit the way poetry can seem like bullshit sometimes.
sweens1026 1 year ago 3
i think the reading should be more faster and energetic. you're not reading sylvia plath, you know...
JakeDonaghue 1 year ago 2