Well, it's Day 5 of spring break and I've honestly been playing music about 10 hours a day, and it's starting to catch up with me. I'm slowly losing my voice. Haha but I just had to pump out one more song before I totally took a break so I did this. Just piano is on a previous video if you want to check that out.
A couple mistakes here and there and my voice sounds horrible, especially on some of the lower notes, but constructive criticism is much obliged.
http://www.myspace.com/danalinnell
P.S. Please rate and comment!
Yeah I'm really not too happy in any of the singing I've been doing. I have definitely been improving it, but it's not where I want it to be. I will keep working on it though. Thank you for the comment and critique :)
danalinnell 3 years ago
nicely done, you have a soft and sweet voice, but sometimes it sounds too stacatto (start of second verse) and i think you should keep your voice more fluid cuz it sounds better.
i liked how after you slipped up you didn't let it get you down and you kept going. overall good job :)
dustycool66 3 years ago