Musicman1066 Obscurity ft Ticaw

My Vocal interpretation of musicman1066s original song
"obscurity"
Lyrics:
The night starts i feel like hiding
my innocense today
so the fears in me stop craving for prayers

The will remains but the strenght is gone
to reach the place where i came from
I'll have break my ideals

Beaten By the will of destiny
i was
crushed
to fight pain and agony
i have to find my way back!

[chorus]
i can only imagine what it is to be free
i can not escape this obscurity
--||--
and now your disgrace is lying in the floor
you know you had enough but you keep begging for more
your puppet friends they give you what you want to see
you live like a fucking god but you will die
just like ME

This time i will save my soul from you
I wont let you break my dignity
not this time

[chorus]

Category:

Music

Tags:

• musicman1066
• obscurity
• original
• composition
• vocal
• cover
• music
• song
• metalcore
• deathmetal
• deathcore

[jonreg123]

O chorus está bom mas aquela parte do "This time I will save my soul from you"... pah a tua mudança de voz apanhou-me de supresa e foi um bocado creepy lol.

^devia escrever em inglês mas hoje nao me apetece, tb o unico que tem que entender a critica és tu :P

[voiceofsorrowguitar]

@jonreg123

thank you very much joao espero que critiques sempre ;)

foi chunga tenho de treinar os agudos a deathcore xD

thanks pela critica once again

[Frank1040]

Don't let what others say fool you. You did great on this if you ask me. The screams are almost one of a kind too if you ask me. Kudos :)

[voiceofsorrowguitar]

@Frank1040 thanks you :)

[comaisacuddlemonster]

e comentares os teus próprios videos com outras contas, fica feio D:

[voiceofsorrowguitar]

@comaisacuddlemonster

eu faço isso? xD

[justsleeptight]

your vocal effects are disturbing. i really like your voice and screams. but the effects are to much.

[jhuniorBvB]

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[ViolenceOfTheIon]

Check out my vocal cover if you like to ;-)

[MetalbarcaCr]

Nice clean voice

[m1k3z0r2]

The first verse was the best part about the song, it reminds me of bands like 'Lydia'. :D Other than that... it was pretty off. :l

[iMellophone]

i cant place a label on you. your singing isnt the best but your screams remind me of either all that remains or august burns red, i cant choose between the two.. but either way the vocals did not fit for the song, maybe you came in on a wrong beat/measure. but they threw me off for the remainder of the piece, maybe you should try uploading a new cover, but starting elsewhere in the piece. (only a suggestion)