Here is my fourth original song post. The song is called Fall. It is about daily struggles and how life continues to be a fight until the end where I will finally be able to see my creator, Jesus Christ. I hope someone will be blessed with this. Again I am playing the acoustic guitar, electric guitar, and electronic drums, all hooked up through usb cables to my computer. All my originals are copyrighted and are not professional recordings. Hopefully I will be in a studio soon to get better sound recordings. Anyway, here are the words:
For all the times that Ive hurt you Im sorry
I know that your strong but my spirit is so weak
I am bound by the world and caught in its grip
I try to stand up but all I do is slip
And I fall on the ground so hard that it hurts
The blood from my heart is only little at first
The more that I fall, the more my heart bleeds
When I get to you what will be left of me?
Standing up is only the beginning of it all
I try to run to quick but then I just fall
I must continue on with all of my might
To be with you Lord, is well worth the fight
but I fall on the ground so hard that it hurts
The blood from my heart is only little at first
The more that I fall, the more my heart bleeds
When I get to you what will be left of me?
And I fall on my knees, begging Lord please
Take me back to you, you're everything to me
I give you my heart, I give you my soul,
You gave me life, now please take control.
Please take control.
your song is very beutiful God bless
montycunningham 1 year ago
@montycunningham Thank you very much. Its a prayer that I have for God to use me someday. Thanks and God Bless
amosbyfaith 1 year ago
awesome chorus man. it really just came out and shocked me. it just offset the verse so well. turned out to be a great song. lets keep the music alive!
SethBalestrieri 1 year ago
Thanks very much.
amosbyfaith 1 year ago
Wow you're such a great person! May God bless you on with this gift and that he will be with you as you go on with life. Love all the covers and songs you have made. May I and people who love this will pray for you and that you go on very far. Subscribe and 5/5
masterranger12345678 2 years ago
Hey, Thank you very much. That was very inspiring for me to know someone really liked the song. I have been working on many more but have not posted any new ones. Hope you check back when I finally post more. I am really just trying to write songs about, of course my on experiences, but also hopefully to give hope to anyone who may be going through something. Thanks again and have a blessed day.
amosbyfaith 2 years ago