Original Song 'Losing You'

Hey guys,
This song is about me and about someone i know. It's NOT a guy which i guess would be the first assumption when you hear the song. But i don't want to say who this song is about. So when you listen to it, it's open to your own interpretation. Relate it to whatever you wish to relate it to and i hope that you enjoy it :)
As always, as much as i wish i played an instrument, i don't, so this is just me singing the melody of my song. And please take the time to let me know what you think. Any comment, good or bad, means a lot to me because it means that you took the time to let me know what you thought and that means a lot to me.
Thank you :)

LOSING YOU

I'm frustrated,
My phone's vibrated,
A text to say you won't be there.
This was our night,
To make things alright.
Now you're going out somewhere.

And I,
Just try,
To act like everything is fine,
But it's not the first time.

Chorus
When I'm there,
You don't care,
You are moving forward unconfined,
I'm left behind.
I feel pushed aside,
And it hurts inside.
I cannot deny what is true,
I think losing you.

Yeah,
I think I'm losing you.

You're so sorry,
That you've hurt me,
But we've been here before.
I don't believe you,
So we argue,
I can't take it anymore.

And I,
Just cry,
A million words that I can't find,
Are speeding through my mind.

Chorus
When I'm there,
You don't care,
You are moving forward unconfined,
I'm left behind.
I feel pushed aside,
And it hurts inside.
I cannot deny what is true,
I think losing you.


Bridge:
And I know,
That you love me,
But I wish you'd show,
Your love more clearly.
To me.

Chorus
When I'm there,
You don't care,
You are moving forward unconfined,
I'm left behind.
I feel pushed aside,
And it hurts inside.
I cannot deny what is true,
I think losing you.
Yeah,
I think I'm losing you.

I hope you enjoyed it and please let me know your thoughts :)

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[mistysparklefog]

awesome



[xAngelPromisex]

Thank you :)

xx

[Vervian1991]

Great lyrics Ren, catchy melody and another fantastic uplifting chorus. I really need to get into the habbit of posting comments on your vids and not in our messages now lol. xx

[xAngelPromisex]

Thank you so much Jack :) That really means a lot to me :D

ahah thank you :) It just means that i can read your comments whenever i wish rather than having to go back and look for them in our messages ;)

xx

[nickjonaslover257]

the chorus tune sounds familiar lol

but other than that i love this and the lyrics are so true <3

[xAngelPromisex]

Really? ahah that's kinda funny :P I've never heard a song like it before :P

Thank you :)

xx

[xAngelPromisex]

Yes, of course this one is sad. I was sad when started writing this song and i was angry when i started writing 'Eleanor.' So this one is sad and the other one is more angry. :P

Thank you :)

xx

[xMisteryDreamsx]

So i think, this song is even a little more sad than 'Eleanor'. So that's my opinion :P

But i love it also, and a wonderful singing angel :D

xx