coruja tv spot

A tv spot I did this year. All blender internal and after effects. Suggestions on what could have been improved are welcome. Unfortunately, this seems to be the limit of where I can get with animation and internal blender for now. But I really hope I can do better next year

Um comercial que fiz esse ano. Todo em blender e afer effects. Sugestões do que poderia ter sido melhorado são bem vindas. Infelizmente isso parece ser o limite de onde consigo chegar com animação e o render interno. Espero conseguir ir além ano que vem.

Category:

Film & Animation

Tags:

• coruja
• blender
• tv
• spot
• after
• effects
• owl
• comercial

[veggiet2009]

looks good, the only real flaw I noticed was that the feet seemed to slip at the 0:09-0:10 marker. Artistically speaking, when you are changing camera angles between 0:02 and 0:08 it seemed like there was too much similarity in the shot, might need a little more variety in angles and poses, for instance having the owl hop down in front of the grey letter to reveal a text... but then again in my editing I've often seen myself having to much variety. lol

[guismoale]

Thanks! There was a "challenge" (considering my artistic capacity) of changing the angle without allowing the reader to understand the word she was standing on. It was supposed to be a "mistery" unfolded in the end and not to be readable so the reader does not get too much distracted.

Like I said, I am not an art director. This is one kind of problem I expected to happen.

[stkjes]

great!